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New Archetype-"Pirate"


Yoshinichi

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To start off your vanillas are no good; make them effect monsters to make them more unique. Your "King of Pirates - Ha Des" is basically just a copy of the name of the Dark Ruler Ha Des and that should be changed to just Hades or so forth. A few of the pictures are a bit fuzzy and stretched outward or inward and could use some cropping. You got some OCG errors in some cards that you have. Your Franz, Pirate #2 needs a more clearer to understand effect ("this card can still attack during the Battle Phase" wth??). Some of your monsters have pretty simple effects in which that's not bad but you could make it better by making the effect more sophisticated and unique. If this was made to be a set it looks great but with just many cards that seem to be not great to the fullest extent. 8/10

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