Transformerfan2009 Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Okay, most of you know me due to my attempt at making a fourth form of Yubel. This time i hope not ot make that same mistake. i've had this idea for a while now i decided to make the Space Machines. i hope you like them. Card Lore for Jupiter: 1 Tuner + 1 or more Non-Tuner MonstersWhen this card is Syncro summoned successfully, increase the ATK of this card by the total ATK of all monsters on the field. This card cannot attack your opponent directly. If "Space Ark" is in play, this card can attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field. No other monsters can attack during the battle phase. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, halve the ATK of all your monsters. If you think Pluto's effect can be improved please tell me how to make it better. Please rate and i hope these are better then Yubel's fourth form. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 theyre good.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Thanks DHplasma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Interesting cards.I see some minor OCG errors.Pics are good, but 1ST could be better, b/c it is very Overused, and try to erase the border.Overall, your cards are great! :3B+ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 Thanks, i hope to use these card sin a Fan story of mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadiz Posted November 3, 2009 Report Share Posted November 3, 2009 "Space Ark" doesn't make any sense or its way to OP"You can Special Summon monsters that have Space Machine in their name from your deck."How many monsters can you Special Summon?? Infinite??And the negation of any effects done to Space Machines is way too heavy. Lower the cards effects, then i'll rate them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 alright, thanks for that. man, what was i thinking? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Woah these cards are very overpowered when Space Ark is on the field (can't be effected by spells, traps, and monster effects makes them extremely hard to kill especially when that card increases their ATKs by 500!!). It even allows you to special summon monsters with Space Machine in their names hence those cards making it an easy 1 turn kill!!!!!!! Also, Space Machine - Mars' last effect has no limit to how many times it can be used thus making it being able to use constantly non stop, which in turn is very cheap. Overall, your cards here are pretty cheap because when you bring out the Space Ark, your opponent's screwed unless they destroy Space Ark. Give your cards a drawback especially Space Ark. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 I'm going to take that part out of the effect. sorry about that. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Space Ark fixed and Space Machine Jupiter added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Venus's effect needs a drawback since the summon ignores conditions, maybe that special summoned monster can only last on the field for 1 turn? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 hmmmm...you got a point there, Ragnarok. okay, i''l change Venus's effect and post Jupiter's Lore up. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crimsonwendy Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 These cards are decent. Kinda hard to use though. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 hmmmm...you got a point there' date=' Ragnarok. okay, i''l change Venus's effect and post Jupiter's Lore up. Thanks.[/quote'] ok that puts a better balance to Venus, so I'll raise the rate to 8.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 yeah, some of them are pretty difficult to use. but not all will have the same summoning effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Machine Evolution and Space Machine Saturn added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 that ritual drawback is too much since it's easy to get a spell to your graveyard Fortunately the 2nd effect compensates, but not enough. And you'll need DNA surgery for it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 I might change the effect of Saturn later on. not real sure though. Space Machine Mercury added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 New Cards Added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Luna needs another effect that just restriction your opponent's flip effects to one your opponent may not even have monsters with flip effects anyway Planet X's effect is better, but even with its summoning conditions, it's still OPed. You need to give it another drawback 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 DUDE, I looked at these cards and immediately thought 'Transformers'. Then I saw your signature. I'm still laughing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Very funny. these are just some pics a family member of mine gave me when he was doing some work. i thought i could use them. Space Machine Pluto added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Fairly OP, especially the synchro. Just curious as to what the field does. Were you the guy that made the badly photoshopped image for yubels 4th form by sticking terror incarnates head on ultimate nightmare? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Yeah, i'm still not happy about the result. i was trying to get the head on top of Nightmare's head but you can see where that didn't plan out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Transformerfan2009 Posted November 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 Ex Machina added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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