chuerta6 Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Love it or Hate it!hey watsup guys, i got the image from deviant art and i edited it. lore:This card can only be summoned if their is at least 1 Winged Beast-Type monster and 1 Dark monster in your Graveyard. When this card is added to your hand by the effect of a card, this card can be Special Summoned to the field. During the Damage Step you can double the ATK of this card or destroy 1 face up monster. When this card is removed from play Draw 1 card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Pic looks like Outer Space.A few OCG errors, like Dark is DARK.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 yeah i always have trouble with ocg senerio: summon a black wing and use the effect of black whirlwind to special summon this card from your hand. From there on use his awsome effect of desroying or doubling attack during the damage step. senerio 2: You draw this card put you dont have a way of summoning it or you just dont want to spend resources then use your allure of darkness to remove it from play and drawing one more card than usual. Note: this card can be summoned if there is a dark winged beast in your graveyard. (both conditions are met) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 But at least you specify if its face-up or face-down, that is a very common OCG error. I've seen it many times. face up is face-up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted November 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 yeah thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 This card can only be Summoned if their is at least 1 Winged Beast-Type monster and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card is added to your hand by the effect of a card, this card can be Special Summoned to the field in face up Attack Position. During the Damage Step you can double the ATK of this card or destroy 1 face up monster. When this card is removed from play draw 1 card. [/Code] OCG fixed + Effetc addition. EFfect about the Damage Step is OPed since you can double its attack. Pic holo is ugly. PIc itself is ok. ~8/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 The pic seems to match the other Blackwings, effect seems Ok (after OCG fix) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 9/10Very nice and helpfull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Hollow Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 best BW card i have seen 10/10:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanderley Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 it is a good cardcould you send me the original image of this card? 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Nice jobthe best BW card i've seenthe ocg is taken care off so i'll give ya 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesWebb Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 WOW! That looks like a real Blackwing-not something some random guy made on YCM RLY good!10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted November 4, 2009 Report Share Posted November 4, 2009 Double the ATK OR Destroy a card...thats way op'ed it has no drawbacks...and the pic doesn't look that great...4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 about the holo... its pokemon holo some people like it some don`t, personally i love the pokemon holos better than the yugioh holos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Dark is an attribute, so it should be DARK Doubling the atk in the damage step makes it OPed 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 Sorry.... Got to be a critique. It's my job.... The OCG Correction was kind of off. This card can only be Summoned if there is at least 1 Winged-Beast-Type monster and 1 DARK monster in your Graveyard. When this card is added to your hand by the effect of a card, this card can be Special Summoned to the field in face-up Attack Position. During the Damage Step you can double the ATK of this card or destroy 1 face-up monster. When this card is removed from play, draw 1 card. Corrected all the minor errors he missed. Great job on the correction though Leo. There wasn't much, except small grammatical errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted December 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 yeah probably but it would be limited to one and it would match the power of judgment dragon and dark armned dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted December 25, 2009 Report Share Posted December 25, 2009 yeah probably but it would be limited to one and it would match the power of judgment dragon and dark armned dragon I lol'ed at this..... Big time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted December 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 yep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Finally, a created Blackwing that actually looks like a Blackwing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxDuelist Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Sorry I love to re-write. I matched the effect to match other Blackwings. This card can only be Special Summoned if there is at least 1 "Blackwing" monster in your graveyard or when it is added to your hand by the effect of a card. During the Damage Step only you can double the ATK of this card or destroy 1 face-up monster. When this card is removed from play you can draw 1 card. So, this is basically another selfish swarmer (which is basically what Blackwings are). Quite unique, I had to change a lot to make it work AND fit to help Blackwings. The whole DARK and Winged-Beast thing can be replaced by "Blackwing" monster because most Blackwings, if not all, ARE DARK Winged-Beasts. I like the concept and you get a B Rank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted December 26, 2009 Report Share Posted December 26, 2009 Overpowered, but it's a very nice card. :) Maybe add this after the damage step effect? Your opponent can discard 1 card to negate the activation of this effect. Then you can discard 1 card to negate that, and your opponent can discard 1 to negate that... etc etc. I'm not sure how to word it, but I think that that would balance it out. That way, your opponent can chose to negate the overpowered effect, but they have to think over if it's worth discarding two or three. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuerta6 Posted February 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 1, 2010 i like the rewritten wording from paradox duelist id keep it like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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