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[graychi]

[Krillin!]

I know you're a new member, and so am I, but there are way too many OCG errors. The pictures are Ok at best and when you refer to a card in another card's effect, you need to innclude the whole name in quotes. You are also overpowering the cards when there levels are too low to have such powers. I hope this advice helps you!

[Starly_64]

Kratos, a Great Leader:

-Image is a bit off. Try to get rid of the white background

-DEF makes no sense "2999"? How about 2950

-Effect is bad and overpowered. Here's a fixed version:

"If you control "Lena, The Master Healer" or "Xan, A True Sorcerer", this card gains 400 ATK."

-Capitalize Types, e.g. "Warrior".

 

Lena, The Master Healer:

-Same as above, but a fixed effect:

"If you control "Kratos, a Great Leader", once per turn, you can negate the effect of a Spell Card and destroy it."

 

Xan, A True Sorcerer:

-Same. But effect is a bit overpowered (since you're Summoning 3 powerful monsters together):

"When this card is Summoned, you can discard 4 cards to Special Summon 1 "Lena, The Master Healer" and "Kratos, a Great Leader" from your Deck. The Summoned monsters cannot declare an attack."

 

Overall, it does need work. The effects are slightly dull, the images do not look like the named monsters, and does need serious fixing. 3/10.

[Kai Freelight]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Did you notice my last card is a woman?

[Starly_64]

Kai Freelight, do not post your own cards in someone else's thread.

[~Vampiress~]

Kratos' date=' a Great Leader:

-Image is a bit off. Try to get rid of the white background

-DEF makes no sense "2[b']999[/b]"? How about 2950

-Effect is bad and overpowered. Here's a fixed version:

"If you control "Lena, The Master Healer" or "Xan, A True Sorcerer", this card gains 400 ATK."

-Capitalize Types, e.g. "Warrior".

 

Lena, The Master Healer:

-Same as above, but a fixed effect:

"If you control "Kratos, a Great Leader", once per turn, you can negate the effect of a Spell Card and destroy it."

 

Xan, A True Sorcerer:

-Same. But effect is a bit overpowered (since you're Summoning 3 powerful monsters together):

"When this card is Summoned, you can discard 4 cards to Special Summon 1 "Lena, The Master Healer" and "Kratos, a Great Leader" from your Deck. The Summoned monsters cannot declare an attack."

 

Overall, it does need work. The effects are slightly dull, the images do not look like the named monsters, and does need serious fixing. 3/10.

 

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1/10

[CanineV2]

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But hey, keep trying, 3/10