Metal Skull Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 I'm now inspired to do Warriors.So this is 1 of em:When this card is Summoned remove from play any number of Monsters in your Graveyard. For each Monster removed this card gains 50 ATK. If this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent destroy 1 card on the field. When this card is destroys a Monster by battle return 1 of your removed from play Monsters to your Graveyard. When this card is destroyed inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent for each of your removed from play Monsters.Rate and correct my OCG please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 I'm almost positive this is already a card name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Oh well i think ill edit the Card Name.But rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 8.4/10.0Â It was a good try but you can do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted November 5, 2009 Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Im with Lexaeus on this one its a card name already Im sure of it too!! You may wanna change that then, something like Minion Warrior, Shadow Warrior, Labyrinth Knight or Demon KnightNot sure I think every ATK points increase had always been in the 100's never in 50's but I maybe wrong. I think this card has too many effects that benefit and not really a negative. You increase ATK points, destroy cards on the field, you also recycle cards back to the Graveyard and if it gets destroyed instant Effect Damage this makes it OP'd in my mind Im afraid. Maybe pick a few and have a summoning requirement like remove card from your hand to Summon it or tribute a certain Type or Level of card to Summon this one. nice little pic and some good ideas just needs polishing up alittle 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2009 Well ill give the name MINION WARRIORBut Lexaeus sayed the ALIEN WARRIOR was a real card name but OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linkisthebest7 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Its not the best, but I don't have as much as a problem as they do. Cool pic, strong and usefull effects. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 the atk gain is a little WAY too small in its effect, and the picture is getting overused, but the idea remains sound 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Looks like an Alien, LOLWUT?10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Looks like an Alien' date=' LOLWUT?10/10[/quote']I first called him Alien Warrior, but people said it already exists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Yup, Alien Warrior is not Warrior-Type. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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