StoryKing Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 The first card in my Colossus Set. The set won't be too huge. Maybe 20 or 30 cards. Tell me what you think hope you enjoy.Colossus SaviorThis card may not be Set. This card may only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 "Colossus" Monsters you control including "Colossus Master Abiah". This card cannot be destroyed by battle. As long as this card is face-up on the field all "Colossus" Monsters you control gain 400 ATK. When this card would be the target of Trap Cards, you may discard 1 "Colossus" Monster to negate it effect and destroy it.-----[align=center]I may redo the holoI hope you enjoyed![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 It's "Normal Summoned or Set". Not just "Set". Besides that, there are a lot of other OCG errors. Effect is balanced. Pic is good. You added a holo? I don't see any holo. Plus 20-30 cards is a lot. Especially for a 2 star member like yourself. No offense, but I don't think you can handle that. Aim lower. 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Ouch dude. I feel rather insulted by that comment because it was just plain rude.Please correct the OCG if your going to say its thereI know its there, thats why i posted itto get feed back to get it fixedand 20 cards isn't that manyi may only make it a ten card setthe holo is also very lightbut im going to try a different one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 I don't mean to insult you. It's just that... well, I've seen many sets that have failed, and well, I don't want to see more. Just saying it's very hard to make 20 cards work well with each other. Learn to read a member's tone. I said "no offense". Which means I was just stating a fact. And think before you post. How long do you think I'd be typing if I had to correct the OCG of every single member's cards? I don't have the time for that. You can ask strawberry mia's shop to fix it for a price. I have fixed your card. I have given you suggestions. Now it's up to you to follow those suggestions, go do research, and fix your card. Nobodies' going to just tell you exactly what you're doing wrong and fix it for you. The world doesn't work that way buddy :D (Well, unless you pay someone to do it. In which case that person would be a teacher or something.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 @frozen judgement wow you sure know how to put up a strong argumentwell nice card, besides the fact it needs a drawback 7/10 fix your OCGwhen this card is targetedmay=canat the end it=it's Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 The picture alone makes the set already good. Gogogogo! make more! nownownow! :DDD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 you forgot to say it can't be normal summoned as well, which makes this OPed, and in any case it needs drawbacks to its effects 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StoryKing Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 I know this is the old version of the card, the better version of the card is in the link in m signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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