Dmaker Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 here it is, (this is probably the 50th time ive said that!!!!) [spoiler=fusion parts ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Fix: "Horn Dragon" + "Superior Dragon" + "Dragon Lord"Each time this card attacks, increase its ATK by 200 x the numbe of LIGHT monsters on the field.Effect is plain and I need to see the fusion parts to rate properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Well not bad.7/10Fix OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 This card has now been editedI hope this effect makes sense, if not just say! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 I see, new fix: During your Draw Phase, instead of drawing a card, you can add 1 of the card's used to Fusion Summon this card to your hand.This is more interesting, but you still forgot the "s around he fusion parts.And I still need to see the fusion parts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Well edit OCG please:"Horn Dragon" + "Superior Dragon" + "Dragon Lord"When this card is Summoned you can skip your next Draw Phase, if you do this add the 3 Fusion Material Monsters used to the Fusion Summon of this card.I hope this is OK.If you don't edit OCG i will not rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 I see' date=' new fix: During your Draw Phase, instead of drawing a card, you can add 1 of the card's used to Fusion Summon this card to your hand.This is more interesting, but you still forgot the "s around he fusion parts.And I still need to see the fusion parts.[/quote'] oh i get you now, im working on them, ill pm you when i have done them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Well edit OCG please:"Horn Dragon" + "Superior Dragon" + "Dragon Lord"When this card is Summoned you can skip your next Draw Phase' date=' if you do this add the 3 Fusion Material Monsters used to the Fusion Summon of this card.I hope this is OK.If you don't edit OCG i will not rate.[/quote']Oh Lexadin already fixed OCG.Sorry for fixing too, i didn't seen the correction post.All right 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dmaker Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 thats ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Overlord Lucan Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Simple Effect, Capitlize monster names etc. People have already corrected the ocg so it's pointless for me. It's not horrible just boring, the main reason for this site is to create cards with new ideas. Simple effects are fine for a start, but after awhile you will need to spruce it up abit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexis Rhodes Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 some grammer errors level needs to go down a bit 6/10:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Now I've ssen the parts I have to sai it isn't woth summoning, IT HAS A 4500 ATK PART!!!A 8/10, for the effort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 the pic is overused, and the effect is way too boring right now 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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