Black Luster Paladin

[jacob0290]

"Black Luster Soldier" + "Buster Blader"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. You can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Trap Card and destroy it. This card gains 300 ATK for each Warrior-Type and Dragon-Type monster on the field and in either player's Graveyard. This card is not destroyed as a result of battle when this card battles with any monster except a Warrior or Dragon Type Monster. When this card is destroyed, it can't be special summoned.

[Alexis Rhodes]

ok picture and good effect 8/10:)

[~Oleon~]

Hmmm, I used that picture before...hmmm...

So, I'm giving you a 4/10, for everything else.

[Lexadin]

Fix: This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. You can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Trap Card and destroy it. This card gains 300 ATK for each Warrior, and Dragon-Type monster on the field and in either player's Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed as result of battle, except by a Warrior, or Dragon-Type monster. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)

After fix: a 9/10, nice work

[SmallieBigs]

The most overused pic ever. It's okay OCG fix above is reccomended after that 9/10.

[Brawler_1337]

First, I must say that the OCG currently on the card may be some of the best that I've seen from a new user (some are so bad that they sound like joke cards). I disagree with the above fix. I think it should be this:

"Black Luster Soldier" + "Buster Blader"

This monster cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. You can discard 1 card to negate the activation of a Trap Card and destroy it. This card gains 300 ATK for each Warrior Dragon-Type monster on the field and in either player's Graveyard. This card cannot be destroyed by battle, except by a Warrior or Dragon-Type monster.

 

That's the best fix that I can think of. I omitted the Special Summoning from the Graveyard part because it's already sorta implied by the fact that this card can't be Special Summoned unless by Fusion Summon.

 

Otherwise, good pic (don't know if it's overused--I'm not an active user). Not the most original of ideas, and it might not catch special attention (I think cards like Buster Blader and Black Luster Soldier have fallen out of popularity as of late), but a very nice job for a newbie.

 

All in all, 8.5/10

[Metal Skull]

8.5/10

[Kotaro]

Pic is overused.

 

The OCG is nearly there, but still some errors so I would use the correction that Brawler 1337 gave if I was you.

 

IMO, its kind of OP as the first few parts of the effect havent really got any drawbacks apart from 1 or 2 small drawbacks but not enough to be classed as balanced.

 

Idea is ok so Im going to give you a 8.2/10

[☨Genocide ☨]

Hey, did u no that pic is overused? Jk, I like it. Always a fan of bringing back old cards for other uses. 9/10

[Coffee Black]

so this card has 3900 ATK when summoned? that's kinda questionable. I think this card is OP in some way, either by what i just said or some other reason. it's not too bad though, 7/10

[Tortoise Kyle]

Card is a little OP, pic is over used, ocg is off.

4/10

[ragnarok1945]

OCG fix is already pointed out, and even with the drawback at the end it's still slightly OPed

 

8.5/10

[Neoshadow155]

little OP especially if your using it in a warrior or dragon deck

besides that 8.7/10