Admiral Tim Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 You actually made an Archtype. could improve on OCG9.8/10 Since you're rebelling against Fake Types' date=' why didja use them? Winged-Beast is a Fake Type. Winged Beast is a real type. See the diff? a dash.[/quote'] sorry i didn't know how to spell winged beast Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 touchan is UP its a one trib with low stats and the milling actually would help your opponent (people want cards in their Graveyard) backfire badly 5/10sparrow is OP its pretty much a lonefire! (not orginal) and has a self summoning (abuse for sure) 7/10the trap id say is interesting, it negates the effect but doesnt destroy the card, then you get to draw, i kinda like it asides from the OCG errors 8.5/10 Good Job note i didnt rate you on OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 can you fix them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 may=cantribute=Tributelife points=Life Pointstributing is NOT destroyingspecial summon=Special Summonto your side of the filedend phase=End Phaseit's during your Standby Phase i would make a draw back for sparrow, for exp you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Black Gale from your Deck with the same Level (or something like that) thunder gale make the effect different for exp during your Standby Phase if your opponent controls 2 or more Spell and Trap Cards then you.... chick is just too plain!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kivoxo Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 might want to put a space before - and one after. card are cool smexy awesome 1337 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 may=cantribute=Tributelife points=Life Pointstributing is NOT destroyingspecial summon=Special Summonto your side of the filedend phase=End Phaseit's during your Standby Phase i would make a draw back for sparrow' date=' for exp you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Black Gale from your Deck with the same Level (or something like that) thunder gale make the effect different for exp during your Standby Phase if your opponent controls 2 or more Spell and Trap Cards then you.... chick is just too plain!!![/quote'] now your just making up effects, i said ocg fix not make up new effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 may=cantribute=Tributelife points=Life Pointstributing is NOT destroyingspecial summon=Special Summonto your side of the filedend phase=End Phaseit's during your Standby Phase i would make a draw back for sparrow' date=' for exp you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Black Gale from your Deck with the same Level (or something like that) thunder gale make the effect different for exp during your Standby Phase if your opponent controls 2 or more Spell and Trap Cards then you.... chick is just too plain!!![/quote'] now your just making up effects, i said ocg fix not make up new effect Lol i showed the OCG errors at the begining! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 wow... that first pick brings back memories... its from duelmasters... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 except for Phoenix SOS's pic is getting slightly overused, everything else about these cards look awesome 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Ah, finally updated9/10When specifying Archtypes, say "___" monster. Edit: Wa-wait. I think I've seen the first one IRL... Oh! Its DM!Don't mind DM pics used in this. Those pics have good Art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 thanks, next ones called water fowl legend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 don't see it on the set. Is it up yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 now it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aa'une Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 These are cool they are like blackwings which I love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 These are cool they are like blackwings which I love. they are a whole new arche type, not black wings, come back when you can properly rate cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 These are cool they are like blackwings which I love. Oh yes, Black Wing, Black Gale. Except these are into different Attributes. New one - 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 is the new one op'ed? i can't decide which should be the main card in the deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Nope, just bad OCG. A little bad OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 good cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Well...9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 wow i dunno why your getting such high ratings lolOCG is horrible needs some major workeffect are bland' date=' some are pointless yet some are OPfail arch type i see nothing original all your doing is tributing monsters to get an effect then it comes backalso this thread is misleading 5.5/10 (betcha half the people who comment dont even read the cards they just assume)[/quote'] i beg to differ i'd like to see you do better:1:OCG is horrible needs some major work: i'm a 10 year old, i have a life and don't study it.2:effect are bland, some are pointless yet some are OP: apparently not some people like my effects3:fail arch type i see nothing original all your doing is tributing monsters to get an effect then it comes back:this is what an archetype is it dosn't have to be original and what do you mean by original4:also this thread is misleading: so you want me to rename my archetype? i can do what ever i want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 wow i dunno why your getting such high ratings lolOCG is horrible needs some major workeffect are bland' date=' some are pointless yet some are OPfail arch type i see nothing original all your doing is tributing monsters to get an effect then it comes backalso this thread is misleading 5.5/10 (betcha half the people who comment dont even read the cards they just assume)[/quote'] your 10 years old thats no excuse plus i have a life im just good at the things i doeffects are bland these people probadly dont even read the cardsorginal is unique you fail, these people are expert card raters had much more experience than you, make a card better than mine, you make an "original" archetype. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 I like the pics 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 wow i dunno why your getting such high ratings lolOCG is horrible needs some major workeffect are bland' date=' some are pointless yet some are OPfail arch type i see nothing original all your doing is tributing monsters to get an effect then it comes backalso this thread is misleading 5.5/10 (betcha half the people who comment dont even read the cards they just assume)[/quote'] your 10 years old thats no excuse plus i have a life im just good at the things i doeffects are bland these people probadly dont even read the cardsorginal is unique you fail' date=' these people are expert card raters had much more experience than you, make a card better than mine, you make an "original" archetype.[/quote'] Give me the lores and I will rate. Or, even easier, upload the cards onto Tinypic, and let me rate. Because I don't know whether to agree with that newbie or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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