Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Hey, guys! This is the second card i made, and the first holo... Please, rate my card, comment, and fix the OCG errors. War Machine - Destroyer Tank Hope ya like! Rate/Comment/Suggest/Fix the errors! Image Credit - MTG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 8/10Nice PIC and holo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 :DThankz you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Great pic and good holo.I'm not sure about the OCG, but seems fine.Great for a new member@A. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Thankz you!If you find some errors, just point them and i'll fix And... A, would be what rate in -/10? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Anytime.A would some rate between 9~~9,5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Anytime.A would some rate between 9~~9' date='5[/quote'] *-*Thknz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamuz Terebellum Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 For a first holo, it's very good!Pic is great!Don't see errors, but i'm not expert...9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Thankz you!:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 for your first card its pretty good, but you have loads of OCG errors and the effect is kinda plainbut the image is great holo is .....but like i said earlier pretty good for a new member 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 It's my second card, not first...Can you point out the OCG errors? So i can fix themThankz anywayz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Linkisthebest7 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Nice card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Why only 7/10? Please give a reason! If you see any error, please point it out for me to can fix! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 For the OCG, just write this as the effect for perfect OCG: When a monster you control is selected as an attack target, switch the attack to this card. When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon a Level 5 or lower Machine-type monster from your hand. Seems like a very nice a effect, though could get OP at times. You should switch it to "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard..." so that it doesn't get too OP, m'kay? Nice job on the holoing, but the pic itself isn't Yu-Gi-oish to me... anyway 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 effect a little bit OPed for the last effect since you didn't say HOW it can be sent to the graveyard 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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