Metal Skull Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent for each Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card's effect is activated, you must skip your next Draw Phase. When this card's effect has been activated 3 times, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Vampire Lord" from your Deck. Image credit to Wanderley. Enjoy and Rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 OCG Fix:"Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 100 points of damage to your opponent for each Zombie-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card's effect is activated, you must skip your next Draw Phase. When this card's effect has been activated 3 times, you can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 "Zombie Lord" from your Deck." Terrible OCG. Pretty ok effect. The underlined means its wrong but im not sure how to fix it but i think thats right. Its fine but that pic is becoming a little overused.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Ocg fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
karasu45 Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 nice card and i love the pic 8/10 ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 the cropping job on the picture is pretty terrible, it looks like because the picture is actually of a dragon you're trying to cover that up to pass it as a bat loland it's kinda underpoweredmaybe you could make it so that whenever you use it's effect you place a counter on it (max.3) and it increases all zombies atk/def by 100 or 200 for eachand you tribute it with 3 counters to summon zombie lordkinda like the skilled magicianand limiting it to once per turn is kinda crap, you'd have to skip 3 draw phases just for a zombie lord, which is definitely not worth itso it'd maybe look something like this;Send 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the amount of Zombie-Type monsters in your Graveyard x100 and place 1 Resurrection Counter on this card (max. 3). If you activate this effect skip your next Draw Phase. Increase the ATK of all all Zombie-Type monsters on the field by 100 for each Resurrection Counter on this card. When this card has 3 Resurrection Counters on it you can Tribute it to Special Summon 1 "Zombie Lord" from your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Dont give him full suggestions to completely change his effect to what YOU would like it best. Its his card just give your opinion on your OCG advice and suggest ideas about what can make the effect easier to understand not change names and the overall idea :[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 the effect is similar in almost every way except i just thought an atk increase would help this card gain a little but of presence and the drawbacks of using this card are slightly lower Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 You also changed the name of the monster special summoned. He may have it as that monster for a reason Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 lol i obviously meant to put in zombie lord not vampire lordjust an accident Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 A meh card. It's not bad but it's not good either. Pic is good (duh it's Wanderley) 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 lol i obviously meant to put in zombie lord not vampire lordjust an accident Well.. Good point. Sorry ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 also now that i realize that it summons zombie lord not vampire lordthis card would be complete murder on your handfor 3 turns you'd have to discard and skip draw phaseswhich is a loss of like 6 cardsplus zombie master requires cards to discard to use it's effectso for a potentially powerful, but most likely weak burn effect you get a monster who's effect you will most likely wont even be able to use because your hand will be completely depleted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 edited zombie lord to vampire lord. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 No OCG errors here.10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 LLD already pointed out the OCG fixes, and its effect is ok, not great 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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