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My sisters first card


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This is my sisters first card, I won't ask you to be nice, but bear in mind she doesn't play yugioh that often. She only really did this because I persuaded her to give it a go!

 

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As long as this card is on the field, destroy one of your opponents face-up monsters per turn in exchange for 200 life points. Using the power of indestructible balloon/cactus love.

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HOLY CRAP That pic and name is amazing. but i gotta give you real rating. is that flavor text in something that isnt vanilla? Make it something like.

"Once per turn you can pay MAKE IT MORE THAN 200 destroy 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field"

not trying to be mean but im sorry the ocg isnt too good. BUT I LOVE EVERYTHING ELSE

8/10

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HOLY CRAP That pic and name is amazing. but i gotta give you real rating. is that flavor text in something that isnt vanilla? Make it something like.

"Once per turn' date=' you can pay 800 Life points to destroy 1 face up monster on your opponent's side of the field."

not trying to be mean but im sorry the ocg isnt too good. BUT I LOVE EVERYTHING ELSE

8/10

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Fixed your fix. Varon, since your OCG isn't good yet, I think you should hold off trying to help other people with their OCG, no offence.

 

Anyway @topic, the card's name isn't very creative at all, the picture should be cropped at the very least and there is flavor text in the original card's text box, just use the fix here^. It's a start, I guess. 6/10

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