Zigaknot Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 Realistic or OP? improvements and comments welcome :D Effect: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 3 Dark-Attribute monsters on your side of the field from play. For every monster this card destroys increase its ATK or DEF points by 100 depending upon the position of the destroyed monster (increase ATK if the monster is in ATK position and vice versa) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 The pic is getting a bit overused, I think..."This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 DARK monsters in your side of the field. This card gains 100 ATK or DEF points for each monster this card destroys, depending upon the position of the destroyed monster."Well, I think it's the right OCG, but not 100% sure.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raphial Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 You shouldn't include "Visa Versa" if you want it realistic. Include everything down to the nitty gritty. Basically, be specific. Also, the picture is a bit over-used and is shrunk by height instead of being equally shrunk by both height and width. It's a bit distracting to say the least. I give an 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 I think Aldebaram's OCG fix is the right, then fix your card. The pic is overused. The effect is quite interesting, though.7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted November 7, 2009 Report Share Posted November 7, 2009 There are a few OCG errors, some Alebaram pointed out. The pic is overused. The effect itself is sort of balanced but would be OP if the ATK/DEF point increase is permanent. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 if the atk/def gain is temporary then it'd be balanced out, and the pic is overused 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 8.5/10Nice work^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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