Underworld Highlander [~Fallen Soul~]

[Necro Pheonix]

 

Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 Level 4 or higher DARK monsters in your hand or by its own effect. Once during your turn, you can remove 1 DARK Fusion or Synchro monster in your Extra Deck from play to destroy 2 cards on the Field. After this effect resolves and your opponent controls no monsters, you cannot declare an attack this turn. Once per turn, you can send 1 Fusion or Synchro monster in your Extra Deck to your Graveyard to change the battle position of 1 monster on the Field (Flip Effects are not activated). When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can remove 2 Fusion or Synchro monsters in your Graveyard from play to Special Summon this card in Defense position. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay Life Points equal to the Level of the monster that destroyed this card x 300 to Special Summon this card in Defense position.

[Aldebaram]

I found some minor errors, like:

cardto = card to

Defence = Defense.

Pic could be a bit better, but it's still good. Effect is long, but good, too.

8/10

[Necro Pheonix]

oops, ill fix that, and Defence/Defense could be spelled different ways depending on where you live and stuff like that...

[Aldebaram]

Sorry.. I'm brazilian, and I learned to spell Defense... :/

I thought it was equal in everywhere

[Max Darkness]

Stop making such long effects!!

 

OCG Fixes (in order):

 

'Hand' = 'hand'

'it's' = 'its'

'remove 1 DARK Synchro or Fusion' = 'remove 1 DARK Fusion or Synchro Monster'

'Oncer' = 'Once' (Just after this, there's the same error as above)

'position' = 'battle position'

'Defence' = 'Defense' (I know you've spelt it correctly, but since this is a US translation, it has to be an 's' instead of a 'c'.)

 

When this card is destroyed by battle, you can pay Life Points equal to the Level of the monster that destroyed this card x 300 to Special Summon this card in (face-up/down?) Defense position.

 

 

Overall, good work. Complex and balanced; but I just fear it might mill your Extra Deck a little too quickly. Just make sure your Synchros and Fusions activate when they're removed from play.

 

9/10

 

 

EDIT: @ Aldebaram; Defence is spelt with an 's' in American English; and with a 'c' in British English. American English is the international standard, so 'Defense' is used more.

[Necro Pheonix]

np,ya were just trying to help.

[ragnarok1945]

long effect, but Max Darkness already corrected the OCG, so this will bet 8.9/10

[Jolta]

There are a few OCG errors

9/10

[Necro Pheonix]

Thanks guys.

[Metal Skull]

Creative.

9/10

[Ornithopter]

Pretty cool card. Pic is amazing!

9/10

[Necro Pheonix]

Thanks :)