squirtli Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Here are some of the cards I've made. Any help with things like OCG would be appreciated![spoiler=Earth Snail][spoiler=Earth Snail's Effect]This Monster gets the following effect(s) when there is a Monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) on the field:-FIRE: This Monster's ATK is doubled and DEF halved. -WATER: This Monster's DEF is doubled and ATK halved. [spoiler=Owl Dragon][spoiler=Owl Dragon's Effect]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersAll Dragon-Type Monsters (excluding this one) you control gain 300 ATK and DEF. [spoiler=Level Down][spoiler=Level Down's Effect]All Monsters on the field have their level reduced by 2. If the Monster's Level was already 2 or lower, it would be a Level 1 Monster. [spoiler=Giant Caterpillar][spoiler=Giant Caterpillar's Effect]Whenever this Monster is destroyed, you may summon 1 Fat Caterpillar Token [insect-Type/Earth/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 2000] to your side of the field. [spoiler=Frog of the Dark Mist][spoiler=Frog of the Dark Mist's Effect]1 Aqua-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersWhen you Synchro Summon this Monster, you may Summon 2 Amphibi Tokens [Aqua/Water/Level 2/ATK 500/DEF 500]. When this Monster is destroyed, all Amphibi Tokens that you control are destroyed. Your opponent loses 300 Life Points for each Amphibi Token that was destroyed. [spoiler=Spike Worm][spoiler=Spike Worm's Effect]This Monster gains the following effect(s) when there is a Monster(s) with the following Attribute(s) on the field: -DARK: This Monster gains 800 ATK. [spoiler=Destroyer Centipede][spoiler=Destroyer Centipede's Effect] [spoiler=Ultimate Destruction Insect][spoiler=Ultimate Destruction Insect's Effect]"Destroyer Centipede" + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersWhen this Monster is destroyed, your opponent must discard the top 3 cards of their deck. When this Monster is destroyed, your opponent must discard a card from their hand. This Monster may not be the target of Trap Cards. [spoiler=Card Revealer][spoiler=Card Revealer's Effect]When your opponent plays a card face-down, flip that card face-up. If it is a Spell or Trap card, destroy it. [spoiler=Skeleton Fish][spoiler=Skeleton Fish's Effect]When this Monster is destroyed, you may remove from play 1 card that is in your Graveyard in order to Special Summon this Monster. [spoiler=Dragosaur][spoiler=Dragosaur's Effect]This Monster is not affected by Field Spell cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Any opinions? I'll be adding more once I get pictures for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 they look pretty good for a beginner. try to make the effects a little longer for your nxt card. nice job with it. i think for Level down ti should be 2 not 3. ~8/10~ i hope to see more from you ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Sorry my noobish, but if your monster has less than 3 stars and you activate Level Down, what happens? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 my guess is that they are destroyed. i am not so sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Okay, thanks Leo. Gijinka: It would have 1 star. I will add that to the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 8.5/10Like them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Nice fixes. Rate evolved into 8.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Thanks! I'll be adding more as soon as I finish these that I'm working on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Any opinions on my new cards? =( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ice0h Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 kol pics... Effects alriye... nothin else to say... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 for early cards, these are very good The only one that's considered a little bland is Owl Dragon, it should have another effect 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Alright, I will work on Owl Dragon. Thanks for the rates! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 nice new cards. add to Spike Worm. needs 1 or 2 rmoe effects. rgeta job though ~8.5/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Alright, Spike Worm is fixed and will be posted in a minute. I still need to think of something for Owl Dragon, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 try to give it an effetc to Support other monsters. Just a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 I updated Spike Worm, and Owl Dragon is being worked on... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
resol999 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Destroyer Centipede fix: "If this monster destroys 1 of your opponent's monsters, this monster gains 200 ATK (max. 1300 ATK.)" Other than that, not bad. There are a few text errors, but other than that well done.6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Thanks for the rate =DNew cards will be coming soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 So that basically means Spike Worm will go will with DNA Transplant (or was that surgery) Which in turn is very neat for it anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Oh boy, I liekz teh Garden. Could improve on OCG.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Thanks for the rate =DI'll get new cards up soon... I just don't know when XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Bump, plus I'm adding new cards now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
squirtli Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 No opinions on my new cards? I'm also about to add more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 good cards8.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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