Choji911 Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 [spoiler=Light] [spoiler=Earth][spoiler=Darkness] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 pic is good and pretty good OCG (i helped you w/ that! LOL). 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultragamer266 Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 It's pretty sweet, but you need to crop, edit, and then put your pictures on the cards. Otherwise the card is great! :) 9.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choji911 Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Thanx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 the EARTH monster is way too bland and boring for effect, please add another one to it 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aa'une Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 These are good can't wait to see more! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 Well, I'd suggest getting more interesting effects for the Earth and Dark ones, but otherwise, they seem great. No major complaints here. 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leturn Master Posted November 27, 2009 Report Share Posted November 27, 2009 As a general note, I recommend changing all the names to "Elemental Knight of [element here]" because it flows better. And your pictures are terrible... you should crop them so they look better. As for card ratings...: "Rieous" -- AHHHH OVERPOWERED!!!! You CANNOT manipulate the Draw Phase like that.... its the method of keeping card advantage even, and players NEED it, seeing as there aren't that many ways to get card advantage back. Maybe add a counter every Main Phase 1, with the effect preventing your opponent's next Main Phase 1 (not Main Phase 2, since the Main Phases are ALSO vital to survival). That'd be OK, but the OCGSP needs work... you shouldn't have to use counters for this card's effect. And as a sidenote... change his name. 4 vowels in a row just doesn't look OR sound good for a card name. "Reous", "Rious", "Reos", or "Reus" would be nicer. "Orieous" -- ummm.... the first guy's name with an "O" tagged on the front. CHANGE IT, PLEASE. Nice idea, but I think you need to decrease the DEF to by 300-500 to balance him out. But his text should read "This card cannot be selected as an attack target by a Level 6 or lower monster." "Ralf" -- I was seriously suprised this wasn't called "Erious" or "Urious". I like his effect, though it'd be nicer to have his DEF at 2000 (you could make a whole serious of "Elemental Knights" with equal ATK & DEF!! That'd be awesome!). Soooooo they need work. But they're decent. Good work for a 5-rep 2-star. Warm Regards,:mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choji911 Posted December 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2009 Thanx for the ideas. But, seriously, stop being a super-critic. Thanx for the posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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