The start of my new set, i'd like to know what you all think

[DarkSigner32]

This is the start of my 4th set, the kraftvoids, they focus on altering ATK/DEF to activate effects or for field control. Kraft is German for power, so there is a bit of a German influence in the set. let me know what you think of the first 5 :D all images found on google

 

LORE:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned when you control 2 face-up monsters with 0 ATK. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to halve the ATK of 1 monster your Opponent controls until the End of the Damage Step in which it battles. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, monsters you control with 0 ATK cannot be destroyed by battle and damage this card's controller would take from battle involving a monster with 0 ATK is halved.

 

LORE:Once per tun, by reducing this cards ATK to 0 until the End Phase, you can select 1 monster your Opponent controls and return it to their deck. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent.

 

LORE:When this card is Normal Summoned, by reducing this cards ATK to 0 until your Opponent's Standby Phase, you can Special Summon 1 LV.4 or lower "Kraftvoid" monster from your hand or Graveyard, that monsters ATK becomes 0 and it returns to your hand during the End Phase.

 

LORE:You can Special Summon this card by returning 1 monster you control with 0 ATK to your hand. Once per turn, by reducing the ATK of 1 monster you control to 0 until your next draw phase, you can destroy 1 card your Opponent controls. If this card attacks your Opponent directly, this card’s ATK and DEF are halved until the end of the Damage Step.

 

LORE:Once per turn, by reducing this card’s ATK to 0 until the End Phase, you can use Synchro Material monsters from your hand. When this card is used for a Synchro Summon, you can increase this card’s level equal to the number of monsters you control with 0 ATK.

[Linkisthebest7]

There brilliant. The pics are amazing and the effects are cool. Keep it up.

[mrgameandwaluigi42]

Really nice. 10/10. Keep up the good work!

[ExtremeG]

Some of the effects are OPed. I realize you're making them have 0 ATK, which looks balanced, but I'm a little worried Kaisers effect. Other than that I loke. Them. Keep up the good work and remember: simplicity is the key ^_^

9.4/10

[ragnarok1945]

Kaiser's effect to drop an opponent's monster atk to 0 is way too OPed. At the very most you should have just cut the atk in half

 

9/10

[DarkSigner32]

Updated, lowered kiasers effect power, now just halves ATK for 1000 points

thanks for all the comments

[ragnarok1945]

that looks better for Kaiser, I'll raise the rate to 9.6/10

[Metal Skull]

Brilliant.

10/10

Nothing more to say.