gpj252 Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 some cards that I made based on the iron man and some other heroes of the marvel: please evaluate, if they can evaluate each card separately and post typing errors i thank.sorry for my bad English, I'm Brazilian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windpepper Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Uh.. well first off I can excuse the spelling errors as you are Brazilian and it happens to everybody. I like the fact that you made a bunch of cards and not just like, three. There aren't too many spelling errors, but almost all of the grammar is incorrect, and the ocg is terrible. Um, Fake card-types are usually frowned upon, although I think they're creative. Some of the quality of the pictures are bad. A few cards are underpowered, and a few are overpowered. I'm a big fan of Iron Man, and I like what you did overall, plus you're a beginner so I'll give you a.. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spirit of DMG Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 too much OCG to correct. first of ll, try "Can not be destroyed by battle" instead of "Invincible to an opponents attack"overall, 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gpj252 Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 thanks, I'll try to fix, but suffer several limitations for not knowing much English.and... i have cut the pictures from the comic books i have here :Dand... you could tell me which cards are with a bad image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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