My First Card

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[squirtli]

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[~Oleon~]

Fix:

While this card is face-up on your side of the field, no monster may declare an attack unless the controller of the attacking card sends it to the Graveyard at the end of the Damage Step.

 

Pretty good for your first card.

7.4/10.

[i i i i]

OK ty for the fix

[mrgameandwaluigi42]

Pretty nice, except Calamity Bombers 1 and 2 are kind of the same picture.

[~Wright~]

For your first cards, these are really good! :)

 

The first one is excellent, and looks awesome. The name and picture are both great. The effect is simple, but it works.

 

Calamity bomber is not nearly as good, however. The name is a bit bland, and pictures you generally want to use for cards to make them look realistic are drawings, like the above picture. The stats of the card are also a bit high for a level 4 effect monster, switch the ATK to 1900, and you're fine there. However, the effect for this card seems pretty bland; when you make cards, you usually want them to have exciting and unique effects, as this makes them more interesting.

 

The first of them is awesome for a first card, but the second one is so-so.

8/10

 

Just saw the second one. I would change the effects of the bombers to:

If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of Spell Card you control, Special Summon it during the End Phase, and destroy 1 card on the field. The controller of the card draws 1 card.

If you do this, reduce the ATK of number 2 to 2200, this will make them more balanced.

[☨Genocide ☨]

Pretty good, but next time, don't use "Real" pics. Try to find something closer to anime. 6/10

[Chex]

The first card is well made and very good but the other 2 cards are more of like joke cards to me. First of all, their pictures really don't look that great and second of all their effects are very vague and real simple. Overall, the first card is excellent whereas the other two are more of a joke. 7.5/10

[Lexadin]

Pretty good' date=' but next time, don't use "Real" pics. Try to find something closer to anime. 6/10

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I agree with above except it doesn't have to be close to anime, just not a puppet.

Good pic sites: Deviantart.com/magicdeckvortex.com/art_catacombs

[~Oleon~]

I've posted here before you put in the Calamity Bombers. Apologies, but I suggest you get rid of the monsters, it makes people think: "Impressive for a beginner" on the first, but the others it makes them think: "He's just a regular noob" If you want good ratings, get rid of the monsters.

[.:Incognito:.]

Meh 6/10 The effects are bland.

[ragnarok1945]

simple effect, a little boring, but good for your first card

 

6.5/10

[Metal Skull]

7/10

For a first try really cool^^

[TwilightSoul]

i like it, i can already see some decks it can work in 8/10

[Canadian]

Cool card, would work well with force attack decks :>

8.5/10

keep it up : DDD