camie95 Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 please can u leave coments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterhalo3 Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 um its a synchro how do you summon it other then that its good but with out that its impossible to summon because there is no cards in the description that are needed to summon so ya really bad but the pic is cool 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 The picture is ok, but to be honest, it is a bad card overall. The reason is that Synchro's have particular summoning requirements which help them become balanced, yours have no requirements. Also Synchro's dont have card descriptions like Normal monsters. Remember to apply an effect instead. I know its your first, but what I just said will help you to make better cards in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
camie95 Posted November 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 well it is my first and i forgot about needing stuff to sommon it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 synchro's dont have descs they have how t summon them and spell card is wird 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 5/10Not the best... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
13rats Posted November 8, 2009 Report Share Posted November 8, 2009 Soul Whisperer should be "Return up to 3 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard to your hand." You should include a drawback. The Synchro is poorly made. As others said, don't describe Synchros. If you look at real Synchro monsters, they all have effects except for one, and that one just has the summoning conditions. Just look at real cards to see how the OCG (official card grammar) works, look at this thread for more help with OCG, and keep on practicing, and you'll improve a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 1st one is not even a real synchro, and given its description it's better suited for joke cards 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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