Frozen Judgment Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 [align=center]Introduction: This set features the new archetype I created, the "Unrested Dead" and their support. This is a new idea so I don't know if it'll work or not. So you guys have to help me and make suggestions. I tried this once before when I was a 2 star member but it utterly failed. So, this is my 2nd attempt. This is a very unique idea and it needs help. So please do. Purpose: The "Unrested Dead" are monsters with relatively powerful effects and stats but they are sent to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. Sounds dumb no? Well, if they're sent to the Graveyard this way, they help boost up the "Unrested Dead" on the field, making them stronger! So please enjoy and rate! Pic credit: Wanderley, Leo, Father Wolf (I might not have used some of these people's pics yet, but I will.) [spoiler=Booster Pack]COMING SOON! [spoiler=Unrested Dead][spoiler=EN000][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 "Unrested Dead" monster you control and removing from play 3 "The Unrested Dead's Final Resting Places" from your Graveyard. When this card destroys a Level 5 or higher monster your opponent controls by battle while you control an "Unrested Dead" monster other than this card, you can destroy all face-up monsters your opponent controls. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, destroy all cards on the field, and while this card is in your Graveyard, whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control destroys a monster your opponent controls by battle whose Level is higher than it, you can destroy 1 card on the field. [spoiler=EN001][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be put in Attack Position. If this card is attacked while in face-up Defense Position, you can destroy all "Unrested Dead" monsters you control to destroy up to 2 Level 4 or lower monsters your opponent controls. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is attacked, you can discard 1 Level 4 or higher "Unrested Dead" monster to negate the attack. [spoiler=EN002][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, you can destroy up to 2 cards you control to Special Summon "Ghost Beast Tokens" (Beast-Type/DARK/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1000) in Attack Position equal to the amount of cards you destroyed. When a "Ghost Beast Token" is destroyed by battle, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard in Attack Position. The Special Summoned cards are not sent to the Graveyard during this turn's End Phase only. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can pay 800 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Ghost Beast Token" in Attack Position. [spoiler=EN005][spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned successfully, you can Special Summon 1 "Twin Goblin Token" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 5/ATK 1600/DEF 1300.) While you control both this card and a "Twin Goblin Token", once per turn, you can take control of 1 monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, once per turn, while this card is in your Graveyard and you control an "Unrested Dead" monster, you can have 1 Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls attack a monster your opponent controls. [spoiler=EN007][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 "Unrested Dead" monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can destroy up to 2 cards on the field and while this card is in your Graveyard, whenever you Summon an "Unrested Dead" monster, you can destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field. [spoiler=EN008][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Unrested Dead" monster you control to destroy up to 2 cards on the field. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, once per turn, while this card is in your Graveyard and you control an "Unrested Dead" monster, you can destroy all monsters you control to destroy up to 2 cards on the field. [spoiler=EN012][spoiler=Lore]While this card is face-up on the field, all "Unrested Dead" monsters you control gain 300 ATK. Send this card to the Graveyard during the End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, all "Unrested Dead" monsters you control gain 100 ATK and whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is destroyed, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. [spoiler=EN013][spoiler=Lore]When this card is Tribute Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Tortured Soul Token" (Zombie-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. "Tortured Soul Tokens'" cannot attack. When a "Tortured Soul Token" battles, its controller does not take any Battle Damage. When a "Tortured Soul Token" is destroyed, you can remove from play 1 "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard to draw 1 card, destroy 1 card on the field, and put 1 Tortured Soul Counter on an "A World Taken Over By the Unrested Dead" you control. Send this card to the Graveyard during the End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, Special Summon 1 "Tortured Soul Token" in Defense Position and you lose 1000 Life Points, and while this card is in your Graveyard, whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect while you control a face-up "A World Taken Over by the Unrested Dead", you can Special Summon 1 "Tortured Soul Token" in Defense Position. [spoiler=EN015][spoiler=Lore]When this card destroys a monster by battle, remove it from play instead. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard to discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can remove from play 1 card you control and 1 card your opponent controls. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 remove from play Level 4 or lower monster. [spoiler=EN017][spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned successfully, you can remove from play 1 card on the field. When this card destroys a monster by battle, remove it from play instead. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, when an "Unrested Dead" monster destroys a monster by battle, remove it from play instead. [spoiler=EN020][spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned, you can select up to 2 of your opponent's Monster Card Zones. When your opponent Summons a monster to the selected zones, the Summoned monster is destroyed during your 2nd Standby Phase after the monster was Summoned. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, when an "Unrested Dead" monster you control destroys a monster by battle, you can select the Monster Card Zone that the destroyed monster was in. When your opponent Summons a monster to the selected zone, the Summoned monster is destroyed during your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after the monster was Summoned. [spoiler=EN022][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by destroying all "Unrested Dead" monsters you control while you control an "A World Overtaken By the Unrested Dead" and 2 or more "Unrested Dead" monsters. Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Unrested Dead" monster you control to destroy 1 card on the field. Send this card to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase. If this card was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, while this card is in your Graveyard, whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can inflict 800 point of damage to your opponent. [spoiler=Support Monsters][spoiler=EN006][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to put 1 Shaman Counter on this card. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Shaman Counter on this card. Once per turn, you can remove an amount of Shaman Counters on this card to Special Summon Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monsters from your Graveyard equal to the amount of Shaman Counters you removed. Those monsters are sent to the Graveyard during the End Phase. Those monsters are treated as if they were sent to the Graveyard by their own effect(s). [spoiler=EN009][spoiler=Lore]If you have 3 or more "Unrested Dead" monsters in your Graveyard that were sent there by their own effects, you can Special Summon this card from your Deck or hand. While this card is face-up on the field, when an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is sent to the Graveyard, it is treated as if it was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect. This card gains 100 ATK for each "Unrested Dead" monster you control. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monster from your hand. The Summoned monster is not sent to the Graveyard during this turn's End Phase only. [spoiler=EN010][spoiler=Lore]When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monster from your Deck to your hand. When this card is destroyed, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monster from your hand. The Summoned monster is not sent to the Graveyard during this turn's End Phase only. [spoiler=EN014][spoiler=Lore]When an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can put 1 Tortured Soul Counter on this card (Max. 5.) This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Tortured Soul Counter on it. You can remove 1 Tortured Soul Counter from this card to have this card attack your opponent directly. Whenever this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a direct attack, discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand. When this card attacks, it is switched to Defense Position until your next Battle Phase. You can remove 1 Tortured Soul Counter from this card to switch it to Attack Position. [spoiler=EN018][spoiler=Lore]Once per turn, you can send 1 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard to have this card gain that card's effect until your opponent's next End Phase. When this card is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can Special Summon the "Unrested Dead" monster that was sent from the Deck to the Graveyard by this card's effect. [spoiler=EN021][spoiler=Lore]While this card is on the field, whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can remove from play that monster from your Graveyard to destroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard that was sent there by its own effect to draw 1 card. [spoiler=Spells][spoiler=EN003][spoiler=Lore]When an "Unrested Dead" monster you control's effect that sends it to the Graveyard activates, you can negate that effect. All "Unrested Dead" monsters on the field gain 300 ATK and DEF. This card gains the following effects depending on how many "Unrested Dead" monsters you control:-1: You can draw 2 cards during your Draw Phase instead of 1.-2: Once per turn, you can discard 1 card to return 1 card on the field to its owner's hand.-3: Once per turn, you can Tribute 1 "Unrested Dead" monster you control to Special Summon 1 "Unrested Dead" monster from your Graveyard.-4: When an "Unrested Dead" monster is Summoned, you can destroy up to 2 cards on the field.-5: You can destroy all "Unrested Dead" monsters you control to remove from play all cards your opponent controls. [spoiler=EN004][spoiler=Lore]You can only activate this card by paying half your Life Points while you control 3 or more "Unrested Dead" monsters. When this card is activated, you can remove from play 1 "The Unrested Dead's Final Resting Place" from your Deck or Graveyard to have this card gain the removed card's effect. Whenever an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is destroyed by battle, you can put 1 Tortured Soul Counter on this card (Max. 3.) You can remove any amount of Tortured Soul Counters from this card and remove from play "Unrested Dead" monsters from your Graveyard equal to the amount of Tortured Soul Counters you removed from this card to discard random cards from your opponent's hand equal to the amount of Tortured Soul Counters you removed. [spoiler=EN011][spoiler=Lore]When an "Unrested Dead" monster you control is sent to the Graveyard by its own effect, you can flip a coin. If the result is heads, you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monsters from your Graveyard that were sent to the Graveyard by their own effects. If the result is tails, remove from play 2 "Unrested Dead" monsters from your Graveyard. [spoiler=EN019][spoiler=Lore]Tribute 1 LIGHT monster you control. Select 1 "Unrested Dead" monster in your Graveyard that was sent there by its own effect. Special Summon the selected monster from your Graveyard ignoring the Summoning conditions. The Summoned monster is treated as a LIGHT monster. When the Summoned monster's effect that sends it to the Graveyard activates, negate that effect. [spoiler=Traps][spoiler=EN016][spoiler=Lore]Select 1 "Unrested Dead" monster in your Graveyard that was sent there by its own effect. Destroy all cards you control and Special Summon the selected monster from your Graveyard ignoring the Summoning conditions. The Summoned card is sent to the Graveyard during your opponent's next End Phase and it is treated as if it was sent to the Graveyard by its own effect. Then, Special Summon up to 2 Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monsters from you Graveyard. [spoiler=EN023][spoiler=Lore]When an "Unrested Dead" monster you control's effect activates that sends it to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of that effect. If you do, you can draw 1 card. If you drew a Level 4 or lower "Unrested Dead" monster, you can Special Summon it. [spoiler=Extra Deck][/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero~ Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 those are pretty cool, dude. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 these pics are excellent some of the effects look too long to be given their low levels though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Thanks for your comments. Welcome back ragnarok ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Updated: EN010-EN013 added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 that is one LONG effect for Minaru, though it and the others all look balanced to get 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Updated: EN014-EN016 Cmon... Isn't anyone going to post? The only regular poster here is ragnarok D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 more balanced out cards just as before, I am glad to see more. And you just need to advertise a little better to get other people's attention for it 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Ok. I'll try putting the link in my sig. (EN017 is also up) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ЯчυКδ ңґεηđдϊ Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 your connector to the dead says it gains 200 ATK and DEF for each shaman token on it it should be counter just thought i would let you know, and good cards otherwise 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkfire27131 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 wow these are awesome!!! 9/10seriously that's like the highest rating i've ever given out, though some of the cards are extremely OP like the field card. You should really add more drawbacks. Note: i laughed so hard at your Noob Quotes espically Cirno! + 1 rep for your awesome sigh :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 your connector to the dead says it gains 200 ATK and DEF for each shaman token on it it should be counter just thought i would let you know' date=' and good cards otherwise 9/10[/quote'] Oops! Thanks for pointing that out! wow these are awesome!!! 9/10seriously that's like the highest rating i've ever given out' date=' though some of the cards are extremely OP like the field card. You should really add more drawbacks. Note: i laughed so hard at your Noob Quotes espically Cirno! + 1 rep for your awesome sigh :)[/quote'] Thank you! ^^ Also, they're OP but since each of them only lasts 1 turn I figured it was okay. Well, I guess if the field card was out then it'd be OP... But this is still a new idea and I really don't know how to work it. And I like to put more quotes in as I see them and when I have time to I patrol around the forum looking for them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 2nd sentence you mean when THIS card destroys a monster in battle it's removed from play (just like Dark Magician of Chaos's effect) I personally wouldn't send the card to the graveyard so soon afterwards though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 good cards9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 BUMP!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 2nd sentence you mean when THIS card destroys a monster in battle it's removed from play (just like Dark Magician of Chaos's effect) I personally wouldn't send the card to the graveyard so soon afterwards though 9/10 Fixed that. Also, Updated: EN018-EN023 added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 your Shimiya's effect while balanced seems a bit too complex for merely lv3 you should up its level and stats 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Well sure ragnarok. I'll think about that though I don't want to put a lot of high levels for unrested deads because since they only stay on the field for a short time, it'll be hard to get tributes. Just want to make this archetype really work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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