Firemonkey Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 new arceus better then 1st. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 No, just no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ElderKain Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 No' date=' just no.[/quote']That and, you didn't have to make a another topic for a card re-make of what you did in the last post...That's what the Edit() button is for... :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firemonkey Posted November 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 didn't now that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brawler_1337 Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Sorry, dude. This isn't a good card. First of all, "destroyed" isn't even capitalized. Second, this card is not worth the Level 8 price tag--its ATK is pretty high, but its DEF is only so-so for a monster of this caliber, and its effect doesn't make up for it. Speaking of the effect, what's supposed to be the condition under which it is activated? When the monster is Summoned? When it's destroyed? When it's flipped? The text does not make this clear. The picture isn't great, either; I think Arceus is supposed to have a little more color than black, white, and blue. I could probably find a better one on Google. All in all, I have to give a 3/10. I know you're new, but I can't really give you any credit for this one... well, actually I have to give you credit for the OCG ("On Card Grammar"): it's not the worst I've ever seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 Sorry' date=' dude. This isn't a good card. First of all, "destroyed" isn't even capitalized. Second, this card is not worth the Level 8 price tag--its ATK is pretty high, but its DEF is only so-so for a monster of this caliber, and its effect doesn't make up for it. Speaking of the effect, what's supposed to be the condition under which it is activated? When the monster is Summoned? When it's destroyed? When it's flipped? The text does not make this clear. The picture isn't great, either; I think Arceus is supposed to have a little more color than black, white, and blue. I could probably find a better one on Google. All in all, I have to give a 3/10. I know you're new, but I can't really give you any credit for this one... well, actually I have to give you credit for the OCG ("On Card Grammar"): it's not the worst I've ever seen.[/quote'] eh what he said, u cud just capitalize destroy, up its def, and say destroy two monsters when its summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 9, 2009 Report Share Posted November 9, 2009 You could improve on OCGWhy is it Dragon-Type? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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