Frost beasts. Please rate

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[align=center]This is my new Frost set. i will add cards as i make them

 

Monsters:

 

[spoiler=Card 1 - Frost raptor]

 

Effect:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned when 'Raptors lair' is on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can special summon one 'Frost Raptor tycoon' from your deck in face up attack position.

 

 

[spoiler=Card 2 - Frost Troll]

 

Effect:

 

When this card sent to the graveyard place three Troll Tokens (ATK/0 DEF/0) in face up Defence position on your side of the field. these cards cannot be selected as a battle target. Every Standby Phase place one counter on each of the tokens. When a token reaches three counters destroy that token and one card your opponent controls.

 

 

 

Spells:

 

[spoiler=Card 3 - Frost Raptors Lair]

 

Effect:

 

Activate this card only when your opponent declares an Attack. Destroy the attacking monster and deal damage equal to half the monsters Attack to your life points. Place this card face down and place one counter on his card.

 

 

[spoiler=Card 4 - Frost raptor Tycoon]

 

Effect:

 

All monsters with 'Frost' in there name gain 100 ATK and DEF points per turn.

 

 

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[Ornithopter]

normal summoned = Normal Summoned/special summoned = Special Summoned/graveyard = Graveyard. Pic is great, but doesnt look a Raptor and... Raptor is a dinosaur, not a dragon. Would be better as a Winged Beast or Dinosaur Type.

Other than this, great card.

8/10

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Thanks for comments

[Metal Skull]

Cool.

2nd card needs 1 more eff.

Anyway 8/10

[Bassa]

Thanks for your rate

[Ornithopter]

Ahmm.. In first card, you say that when the card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 Frost Raptor Tycoon. But it's a Spell card :'p. A Spell Card cannot be Special Summoned :'o. Frost Raptor Tycoon's pic is great, but is not the most useful card.

[Cloister]

FR OCG fix:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned when 'Raptors Lair' is face-up on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can Special Summon 1 'Frost Raptor Tycoon' from your Deck in face up Attack Position.

 

Makes no sence the last effect, should be "When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can place 1 "Frost Raptor Tycoon" face-up, in your Field Card Zone."

 

FRT OCG fix:

All monsters with "Frost" in their card names gain 100 ATK and DEF.

 

But good cards overall, except FRT effect is too short 7/10

[ragnarok1945]

the spell card effect is WAY too basic, you should give it another one and you're good

 

7.8/10

[Mindscatter]

FR OCG fix:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned when 'Raptors Lair' is face-up on the field. When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can Special Summon 1 'Frost Raptor Tycoon' from your Deck in face up Attack Position.

 

Makes no sence the last effect' date=' should be "When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can place 1 "Frost Raptor Tycoon" face-up, in your Field Card Zone."

 

FRT OCG fix:

[b']All monsters with "Frost" in their card names gain 100 ATK and DEF.[/b]

 

But good cards overall, except FRT effect is too short 7/10

 

(bolded)...I...don't think he meant that. He meant 100 per turn permanently and stacking.

 

It is correct somehow but...Bassa, people nowadays kinda hate lingering effects. Use counters!

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Thanks for the tips

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