Soul Immortal Posted November 10, 2009 Report Share Posted November 10, 2009 Phoenix Man~ 2nd attemptcard text : Once per turn , you can Special Summon this monster from your Graveyard by negating the effects of 1 Effect Monster on your side of the field. Destroy all cards on your side of the field during the End Phase of the turn this monster was Special Summoned. Image Credit : MahtalielImage Link : Engel, Chaos Mediator~ new cardcard text :During the Stand-by Phase of any players turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to change the attributes of any monster on the field to DARK or LIGHT. If there is 3 or more DARK monsters on the field, all DARK monsters cannot declare an attack or be attacked. If there is 3 or more LIGHT monsters on the field during your End Phase, then switch control of this monster, and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent.Image Credit : Kuroi-TsukiImage Link : Madhattercard text :1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner MonstersYou can Synchro Summon this monster without using a Tuner Monster. If you do this, then this monster is treated as a Tuner Monster, and the original ATK and Level of this card is halved. When this monster is Synchro Summoned correctly, you can destroy 1 card on your opponents field. If this monster is used in a Synchro Summoning, then this monster remains on your field.Image Credit : ZBushImage Link : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 that 2nd effect seems to cause more harm to you than do good you should have said it destroys all cards on your side of the during during the end phase the monster was summoned, but then the destroyed cards return to the field next turn 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Thanks for your comment Ragnarock . I initially thought of it as a last resort thing or to finish someone off when the time was right . I might leave it as is , but has already got the creative juices flowing again for ideas on my next card/s . Also thanks to Junk Raver for the OCG Grammar thread , which will probably mean re-doing the whole card again . I dont mind though . Any more comments ? UPDATE : new card , Engel, Chaos Mediator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 so like a monster form of DNA surgery, nice 2400 def is reasonable for lv5. Change is to are for sentence 2 though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Immortal Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Thanks again Ragnarock . Seems like your the only one that wants to comment on my thread lol Did you read the new rating / commenting format ? I think it might cut down on alot of comments but at least well start getting decent feedback . . . UPDATE : new card . Madhatter ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 given its effects, I'd say it's balanced not to have any effects while on the field itself The 2500 atk is still a bit too high for it since it;s lv6, make it lv7 and you're good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Great to see you again, Soul Immortal =D. I really like your "Phoenix Man" (thought it should have been a Winged Beast >_<). I think you have one space to much at this part: Once per turn , you I think it should be Once per turn, you but other then that I don't see any OCG mistakes. The last part of his effect looks a bit extreme but is pretty close to what its effect needs to be balanced. The picture and name fit pretty good with the effect. 9/10 I don't like your Engel, Chaos Mediator or your Madhatter. Your Engel is horribly underpowered, I really can't find any use for that card. But I'm curious where you got the name for him, because in dutch "Engel" means "Angel". As for the last one, I'm just confused. Does his level already half in the Extra Deck or do you just trade in any level 6 monster for a level 3 tuner monster? Is the first effect counted as being Syncro Summoned Correctly for the second effect? And the last effect is horribly overpowered on its own. You are making a -1 summon to a -0 summon, technically a monster power up. Both gain a 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Great cards! ^^ 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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