lilmantoot Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Good, but a few OCG errors. 9/9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
resaclan62 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 some cards have bland backrounds, but they are awesome.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 C- is my rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 tnx for the great comments i'll try to make the next one better than a C- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 The main issues here are cards that are too powerful, those that are not powerful enough, cards that are exact copies of real cards, and improperly conceived cards such as effect monsters that don't have effects. Common OCG errors in your work include the use of unnecessary words or phrases, such as "when you activate this card." It's a given that a card's effect takes place when it is activated. The words "points" and "successfully" are no longer used. Lastly there's a lot of key words that are always capitalized such as Graveyard. I suppose I could post accurate texts to help ya learn, if I'm bored enough to fix so many cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abyssimal Posted April 6, 2010 Report Share Posted April 6, 2010 these are good good job me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.