GreenMetaDragon Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Here are 3 wizardstell me wat u think and if the ocg needs fixing tell me wat u think it should be so i could change itdont forget to raterock on doods Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Undead Minion's effect is WAY too bland, you should give it another one Wizard's Vengeance's effect is barely any different from Magic Forumla, so that's uncreative Only Undead Warlock's effect is a reasonable one 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 These cards have some OCG errors and also the first and last cards have way too many cards in the Real TCG that are like that a.k.a. they're too plain and vague. The second card doesn't specify if the "Undead" monster has to be on the field or in the graveyard etc. That effect could be real cheap. Also why make them called Undead when they're Spellcaster-type monsters; why not make them Zombie monsters instead? The first card's picture is ok but is blurry and has a white border in which you should crop it out. The second card's picture is a bit plain with the background. Overall, fix your OCG, make the picture for the first card look better, and make the first and last card's effect more unique and useful due to the amount of cards that are already out that are like those two. 6/10 OCG fix: The Wizard's Vengeance: A Spellcaster-Type monster equipped with this card increases its ATK and DEF by 500 points. OCG fix: Undead Warlock: This card gains 300 ATK for each other monster on the field with "Undead" in its name. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Spell or Trap, you can Special Summon 1 "Wizard's Apprentice" from your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. OCG fix: Undead Minion: When this card is Summoned, you can send it to the Graveyard to increase your Life Points by 500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GreenMetaDragon Posted November 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 Undead Minion's effect is WAY too bland' date=' you should give it another one Wizard's Vengeance's effect is barely any different from Magic Forumla, so that's uncreative Only Undead Warlock's effect is a reasonable one 6/10[/quote'] not to bust ur balls or any thing but ive never heard of magic formula Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 11, 2009 Report Share Posted November 11, 2009 http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magic_Formula It's right here. Notice anything similar about the effects? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Lightning Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Wizards Vengeance = "Magic Formula" except you can equip it to any spellcaster. Warlock = Effect is confusing...where are the "Undead" monsters supposed to be? Minion = Effect is UP'd and bland. Pics are meh, OCG is off slightly. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Bad pics.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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