Deceitful Rat

[Aderonica]

The effect may be a little confusing, so I'll try to explain if there is any confusion.

 

 

 

Effect:

 

"FLIP: Send this card to your opponent's Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. Afterwards, your opponent must show every card he draws from his Deck under any circumstance (ie Draw Phase, Magic/Trap/Effect card, etc.). When your opponent shows "Deceitful Rat", it is immediately Special Summoned to the field in face-up Attack Position. The previous effect of showing Drawn cards is negated afterwards. As long as this card is on the field, the controller cannot Special Summon or Normal Summon any monsters with effects (Setting is excluded). When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, the controller is inflicted with 1000 Life Points of damage."

[Kiyo]

Okay, the pic made me chuckle for some reason. I guess it fits, but it doesn't suit YGO well.

Effect is very nice, original, complex, and balanced.

Next, the OCG, is basically bad. I believe this is how it should read:

"FLIP: Shuffle this card into your opponent's Deck. While this card is in your opponent's Deck, your opponent must show you all cards they draw from their Deck. If your opponent shows you "Deceitful Rat", Special Summon it to your opponent's control. The controller of this card cannot Summon Effect Monsters. When this card is destroyed, inflict 1000 damage to the controller of this card.

 

6.8/10

[~Wright~]

OCG correction:

 

Flip:

Place this card face-up inside of your opponent's Deck. If this card is face-up inside of your Deck, your opponent must show each card that they draw. When you draw this face-up card, Special Summon it to your side of the field. When this card is sent from the field to the Graveyard, the controller of this card takes 1000 points of damage.

 

The name seems very good, although the picture is not. The stats are okay, but the effect is sort of overpowered, because your opponent must show you every card that they draw. I would increase the DEF to 1500, and give it this effect.

 

Flip:

When this card is flipped face-up but not destroyed by battle, place this card face-up inside of your opponent's Deck.

 

This way, there is the chance the effect will not activate, and this should make it more balanced. :D

7/10

[Aderonica]

Yeah, I'm still used to trying to correct the grammar :(

[ragnarok1945]

without the modifications, this is OPed

 

there's no telling where it'll end up after the shuffling to your opponent's deck, so there's no telling how long it'll take to draw it, which will lost element of surprise to your opponent for way too long

 

5/10

[Metal Skull]

8/10

Awsome idea.