Lachesis Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 [align=center]We Are Legion Set"Nomen mihi Legio est, quia multi sumus.""My name is Legion, for we are many." [spoiler=WAL-EN001: Legion Dragon] [spoiler=WAL-EN002: We Are Legion!] [spoiler=WAL-EN003: Legion Egg][spoiler=Lore]This card can not be the target of Trap, Spell, and Effect Monsters. This card can not be attacked. You cannot equip spell cards to this card. This card must to remain on the field for 3 turns until you may use it to Synchro or Fusion Summon. You may only place 2 Legion counters on this card. Tribute 2 Legion counters to increase the level of this card to 3. [spoiler=WAL-EN004: Legion Scientist] [spoiler=WAL-EN005: Legion Raptor] [spoiler=WAL-EN006: Legion Emperor] [spoiler=WAL-EN007: Legion Wolf] [spoiler=WAL-EN008: Legion Warhammer] [spoiler=WAL-EN009: Legion Warrior] [spoiler=WAL-EN010: Legion Pyro] Please correct me on any OCG errors. More to come.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Legion Dragon's 1st sentence should be This card cannot be targeted by Trap cards anyways, you did not state what those spell counters can do for your synchro (need to add an effect for it) your spell card should have said spell counters then. After all, there's no cards I see that hold Legion counters 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Why is Legion Egg a requirement for Legion Dragon when Legion Egg isn't a tuner? And why do people keep adding secret sparkles to cards with ultra lettering? That's gotta be the most common mistake on YCM. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lachesis Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 @Jazin Kay: Um, what sparkle?@ragnarok: Thanks for the tip, I forgot to put that on there. Also, im making new cards right now so more should be up in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lachesis Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 New cards up! Legion Scientist and Legion Raptor! Again, please rate and correct my OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 This in an awesome archetype (I think). Keep going strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Many errors, I found.EXCELLENT pics, though.AMAZING ideia ^^The holos aren't so good, but...8/10Shouldn't be writen 5/? in the name? I see 5 cards ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lachesis Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Many errors' date=' I found.EXCELLENT pics, though.AMAZING ideia ^^The holos aren't so good, but...8/10Shouldn't be writen 5/? in the name? I see 5 cards ^^[/quote'] Thanks. Can you please point out these errors? @Spartan: Thanks! I'm creating new cards as you read this!Bump: Legion Wolf added! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 They get better and better, but Gijinka, where are the errors? I see none. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 glad to see you put more updates you need to change may to can in the text also, give max counter limits to prevent cards from being OPed 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lachesis Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 glad to see you put more updates you need to change may to can in the text also' date=' give max counter limits to prevent cards from being OPed 7/10[/quote'] Um, did you even read the effects? There are counter limits on all of them...ok, ill change all the mays to cans tomorrow. Also, 3 new cards!Legion Warhammer, Legion Warrior, and Legion Pyro! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 good cards8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Legion Pyro is merely a monster version of Swords of Revealing Light, and it's only for ONE monster. For the cost of so many counters, it's considered UPed 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lachesis Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Legion Pyro is merely a monster version of Swords of Revealing Light' date=' and it's only for ONE monster. For the cost of so many counters, it's considered UPed 8/10[/quote'] So should it be field-wide? or should it be for less counters? anyway, Im fixing OCG right now for all of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 rreeallllyy cool pics man!some OCG errors on some cards 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lachesis Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 5/10 Um, Explain please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Effects are simple, but great.Pics are FREAKIN AWESOME! ^^8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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