Death_Star Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 [align=center]Divine Dark Swordsman My first card. Please give a rating! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters you control. Once every 2 turns, discard 2 cards to increase the ATK of this card by 1000 until the End Phase. If this card battles with a DARK monster, destroy that card before damage calculation. If this card battles with a LIGHT monster, destroy this card before damage calculation.[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Very good OCG and a very good image. I am impressed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 impressive picture, where did you get it? Problem is so many decks rely on DARK monsters, this card will get destroyed way too easily I'd change the last effect so it can last longer on the field 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 UP with the last effect. Excellent OCG for first card, beyond excellent. I can only see 2 little errors at a glance (You capped monster once and said once "every" turn. It should be once per turn.) Besides that, the pic is good. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Very good OCG and a very good image. I am impressed. Any rating? And thnx =D impressive picture' date=' where did you get it? Problem is so many decks rely on DARK monsters, this card will get destroyed way too easily I'd change the last effect so it can last longer on the field 8/10[/quote'] Yea well ...... I'll change the effect around. And thnx for rating xD UP with the last effect. Excellent OCG for first card' date=' beyond excellent. I can only see 2 little errors at a glance (You capped monster once and said once "every" turn. It should be once per turn.) Besides that, the pic is good. 9.5/10[/quote'] UP with the last effect? What do you mean? I was sure the OCG was right, after all, I wouldn't be here if I didn't know how to write effects or anything like some of the noobs here :/ Thnx for the rating =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters you control(Specify from where). Once every 2 turns, discard 2 cards to increase the ATK of this card by 1000 until the End Phase. If this card battles with a LIGHT monster, destroy that card before damage calculation. If this card battles with a DARK monster, destroy this card before damage calculation. Easy killer, not many Dark warriors to really use in the game, bad against BWs... Anyways, I'll give it a 7.0/10 ~Demiurge~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters you control(Specify from where). Once every 2 turns' date=' discard 2 cards to increase the ATK of this card by 1000 until the End Phase. If this card battles with a LIGHT monster, destroy that card before damage calculation. If this card battles with a DARK monster, destroy this card before damage calculation. Easy killer, not many Dark warriors to really use in the game, bad against BWs... Anyways, I'll give it a 7.0/10 ~Demiurge~ Card updated. Oh and its pretty straight forward that the "tribute 2 DARK Warrior-Type monsters you control" means from your field. You can't "control" a monster in the Graveyard or in your deck. -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card is rather good for someone knew This is rather UP to me Awsome pic, where did you get it? 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Encalade Shinamisu Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 It's actually best that you specify, such as saying: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters on your side of the field. ~Demiurge~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card is rather good for someone knew This is rather UP to me Awsome pic' date=' where did you get it? 7.5/10[/quote'] Google. Looking for a cool avi and come across it. Also, why 7.5? What did I screw up? It's actually best that you specify' date=' such as saying: This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters on your side of the field. ~Demiurge~ If you say so but I just can't be bothered. Lol xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 sorry should have stated that Um where you said "removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters you control" You should state where like from the field, from your hand, from your Graveyard, etc... And this card also gets killed easily if it battles a Light monster. Thats is why i gave you a 7.5/10 Sorry should have stated this Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 sorry should have stated that Um where you said "removing from play 2 DARK Warrior-Type Monsters you control" You should state where like from the field' date=' from your hand, from your Graveyard, etc... And this card also gets killed easily if it battles a Light monster. Thats is why i gave you a 7.5/10 Sorry should have stated this[/quote'] It's been updated. Oh and its pretty straight forward that the "tribute 2 DARK Warrior-Type monsters you control" means from your field. You can't "control" a monster in the Graveyard or in your deck. -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Don't put "with" after "battles". Damage calculation is capitalized, I'm sure. Other than that, a bit UP. Awesome pic and excellent OCG for a new member. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 see no errors but pic is not that impressive, but it's still good 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Don't put "with" after "battles". Damage calculation is capitalized' date=' I'm sure. Other than that, a bit UP. Awesome pic and excellent OCG for a new member. 8.5/10[/quote'] "Battles with" is correct and "damage calculation" isn't capiltalized. I'm sure on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 10/10AWSOME!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 see no errors but pic is not that impressive' date=' but it's still good 8.6/10[/quote'] Funny, everyone else thinks the pic is really good. 0.o Anyway, thanks. 10/10AWSOME!!! Thanks =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grassfoot Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 great pic and so cool just effect relies too much on DARK and LIGHT monsters.9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Don't put "with" after "battles". Damage calculation is capitalized' date=' I'm sure. Other than that, a bit UP. Awesome pic and excellent OCG for a new member. 8.5/10[/quote'] "Battles with" is correct and "damage calculation" isn't capiltalized. I'm sure on that. Example on that: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ally_of_Justice_Catastor As you can see, it doesn't say "battles with". However, maybe "battles with" is correct as well. I do admit I was wrong about the damage calculation thing though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death_Star Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 great pic and so cool just effect relies too much on DARK and LIGHT monsters.9.2/10 That's because it belongs in a DARK Deck -.- Don't put "with" after "battles". Damage calculation is capitalized' date=' I'm sure. Other than that, a bit UP. Awesome pic and excellent OCG for a new member. 8.5/10[/quote'] "Battles with" is correct and "damage calculation" isn't capiltalized. I'm sure on that. Example on that: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ally_of_Justice_Catastor As you can see, it doesn't say "battles with". However, maybe "battles with" is correct as well. I do admit I was wrong about the damage calculation thing though. But that's the new OCG (the "battles with" thing). Anyway, I'll fix it. And yea, I knew I was right on the damage calc. thing. Edit: Can't fix the card, turns out I didn't deleted it by accident. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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