Pikachu Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Yep, it's me again. Due to the new rule by Junk Raver, I except you to give me positive criticisms and actually 'helping' me correct my OCG. If you haven't noticed, I am still using the old OCG wording. Anyways, rate, comment, post. Thanks. [align=center] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned unless your Tribute 2 WATER monsters on your side of the field. For every WATER monster on the field, increase this card's ATK by 200. If there are no WATER monsters on the field, you may Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand. For every WATER monster destroyed in battle, decrease your Life Points by 200. If this card is a target of your opponent's card effect, you may pay 500 Life Points to negate the effect and destroy that card. When this card is destroyed, inflict the amount of WATER monsters (excluding this one) destroyed in battle x300 to your opponent.[/align] And, credits to Father Wolf and his epic Custom Image Archive for the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Launcelot335 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 cool card, and it doesnt seem OP because of all the neg LP's... but still haveing like 4 effects is a lot.the card itself is awesome. picture is good, it fits well it hydrogedon and oxygeon (i know i cant spell)and with the last effect. do you have to specify when the cards were destroyed in battle... im not sure but it seems kinda vauge. still good idea, and decent picture 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 cool card' date=' and it doesnt seem OP because of all the neg LP's... but still haveing like 4 effects is a lot.the card itself is awesome. picture is good, it fits well it hydrogedon and oxygeon (i know i cant spell)and with the last effect. do you have to specify [b']when the cards were destroyed in battle[/b]... im not sure but it seems kinda vauge. still good idea, and decent picture 8/10 For that part, I wanted it to mean the cards that were destroyed in battle while 'Dual-Water Dragon' was in play. But now, it seems that it's the amount of cards destroyed in the whole game. Thanks for the comments though. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Ahhh, When was the last time you stepped ino this Section.You need to specify if face-up or face-down9/10 Like: For every face-up WATER monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Ahhh' date=' When was the last time you stepped ino this Section.You need to specify if face-up or face-down9/10 Like: For every [b']face-up[/b] WATER monster FUUUUUUU- Yea, that's the most annoying part of effects, but thanks for rating. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Good card 8.5/10 The only that is wrong with the card:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned unless your Tribute 2 WATER monsters on your side of the fieldCorrect ocg:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 WATER monsters on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 Good card 8.5/10 The only that is wrong with the card:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Special Summoned unless your Tribute 2 WATER monsters on your side of the fieldCorrect ocg:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 WATER monsters on your side of the field. Actually, that's wrong. (Sorry.) My effect means that the card can be Normal/Special Summoned, but you must Tribute 2 WATER monsters. Your effect means I can't Normal Summon it no matter what. But thanks for the comment/rating. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 plenty of effects, this is going to be one versatile card There's atk gain, atk loss, along with LP gain and LP loss, so this is well balanced out 9.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~RoBoTiClOvEr~ Posted November 12, 2009 Report Share Posted November 12, 2009 My rating is B+Known to you as 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 plenty of effects' date=' this is going to be one versatile card There's atk gain, atk loss, along with LP gain and LP loss, so this is well balanced out 9.4/10[/quote'] Thanks Ragnakok. ^_^ My rating is B+Known to you as 8.7/10 May I have the reason? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 OCG errors fixed - anytime you use "may" change it to "can", anytime you use "every" change it to "each". thats all I can see that you need to change.What I like about the card - I really like the pic of the card and seeing as its a card made by Pikachu how could you not like it? ^.^ Rating - sadly because you had some OCG errors that deducted the grade so I'd give it a 8/10 you need to work on your OCG alot more Pikachu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Oh, thanks mate. You see, I haven't done cards making for a good 4-5 months. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 good card8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bott52 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 You should rename it Dual Water Dragons because they look exactly like the monster water dragonIts a little OP due to the part where you inflict damage to your opponent when it is destroyed...I'll give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Balanced.8/10Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 good card8.9/10 Thanks. You should rename it Dual Water Dragons because they look exactly like the monster water dragonIts a little OP due to the part where you inflict damage to your opponent when it is destroyed...I'll give it a 7/10 Dual Water Dragons? But it is one dragon...but thanks. Balanced.8/10Cool. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spartan919 Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Cool card. I don't see any OCG errors, so yay for you. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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