Neo-MasterX Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Another card from the set I'm working onLore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Pyro-Type and 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from play. This card gains 500 ATK each time its owner loses Life Points. When this monster is selected as an attack target, its owner can pay 1200 Life Points to negate the attack. If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent loses Life Points equal to the combined ATK of his/her monsters. P.S. thanks for the OCG fix hrash0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hrash0 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 OCG Fix:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 1 Pyro-Type and 1 Spellcaster-Type monster from play. This card gains 500 ATK each time its owner loses Life Points. When this monster is selected as an attack target, its owner can pay 1200 Life Points to negate the attack. If this monster is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, your opponent loses Life Points equal to the combined ATK of his/her monsters. That being done, it's an aweome concept but horribly OPed. It's like, "whatever you do, your opponent gets stung badly."I'd change the lore to:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 2 Pyro-Type and 2 Spellcaster-Type monsters from play. This card gains 500 ATK each time its owner takes Battle Damage. When this monster is selected as an attack target, its owner can pay 1500 Life Points to negate the attack. When a monster with an ATK higher than the ATK of this card selects this monster as an attack target, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the ATK of that monster to your opponent's Life Points. Again, another problem would be the supreme pointlessness of the negate effect. Why pay 1500 when you can just have your opponent pay for killing your monster? It's broken in that sense. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 wooow 4 monsters for a level 8 monster thats not good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hrash0 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 wooow 4 monsters for a level 8 monster thats not good Considering the gamebreaking effects that you've given it (it's Krebons + Magic Cylinder) only 2 monsters makes it too easy to get out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 500 atk is a little bit too much, you can just burn yourself 100 LP and its atk jumps to 3000 right away You should lower the atk gain to 200 at the very most so it can't become OPed too quickly And it's not even that hard to get out to the field 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Could add Level restiction to the summon like 1 Level 6 or higher or something or it will be too OPedBut good overall except its OPed8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Meh, OCG is pretty good 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 OP.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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