~Wright~ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Made this faster than most of my cards, so... it may not be perfect. I would have made it a 5 star, but contest rules forbid it.[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned from your hand or Graveyard except by Tributing 1 Warrior-Type monster you control equipped with an Equip Spell Card. Increase this card's ATK by 100 for each Equip Spell Card in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can remove from play an Equip Spell Card from your Graveyard to add an Equip Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. You must pay 500 Life Points to activate it, and you cannot activate it this turn. When an Equip Spell Card is activated, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or Lower Warrior Type monster from your Graveyard. Equip the Special Summoned monster with the Equip Spell Card that was activated. I think I may have messed up OCG on the corrections...Please give lots and lots of critique! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hollowmaster999 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Minor OCG: When an Equip Spell Card is activated, you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. Equip the Special Summoned monster with the Equip Spell Card that was activated. I'm not a big fan of equip cards, but this looks like it has its purposes, and the picture is great. Not really liking the name either... I think "Gearfried" is just getting old... Anywho, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 10/10Awsome.Everything looks fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Seems great ^^pic is awesome.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Brill pic, no OCG errors here I can see. But, special summoning it could be OPed. You could say it can't be Normal Summoned without tributing one warrior. Congrats. You have kept the aim of the warrior types, their effects, and my intent. 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 problem is you didn't say that's the ONLY way to special summon it, so it could end up getting on the OPed end 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Good card, no major OCG errors8/10could be OPed if you use it right Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Corrections made. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
$ûþ®èmè Kì�§ Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Nice card 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cyberlightmagician Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Yes, it's good, but I wouldn't use it, because I don't own many equip spells (my only one is Horn of the unicorn.) From Maruka Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 It's Ok, but we already have Gearfried the Iron Knight and Gearfried the Swordmaster. A little more imagination wouldn't go amiss here. OCG seems fine and an awesome pic, so 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Yes' date=' it's good, but I wouldn't use it, because I don't own many equip spells (my only one is Horn of the unicorn.) From Maruka[/quote'] Yeah. It's meant to support warrior builds, which rely a lot on equip spells. Thanks for the critique though. The reason I named it Gearfried is that Geirfrieds are generally the "boss monsters" of warrior builds, ie Gearfried the Swordsmaster, and Phoenix Gearfried. That, and I can't come up with good names. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☨Genocide ☨ Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Last parts confusing. Are you talking about the effect of the monster, or the effect of the spell? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Last parts confusing. Are you talking about the effect of the monster' date=' or the effect of the spell? 8/10[/quote'] When an equip spell is activated, you summon a warrior from your grave and equip the spell to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Corrections made. :) thanks, now it looks MUCH better balanced out, so I'll raise the rate to 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Thanks. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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