.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Hello, YCM members =D - I was looking for a way to make my own Yu-Gi-Oh! Cards when I saw this forum. Then, I decided to join :] . My grammar isn't the best, so, fix my errors. Suggests and helpful critics will be welcome ^^ Gold Skull Armor ExecutorGold Skull Armor Executor EffecT - This card cannot be Summoned except by Special Summon by Tributing 1 or more Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Gold Counter on this card (max 3.). You can remove 3 Gold Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. EDIT - Effect fixed, Thankz to Junk Raver.Rate/Fix grammar errors! Thankz! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card cannot be Summoned except by Special Summon by Tributing 1 or more Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Gold Counter on this card (max 3.). You can remove 3 Gold Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. ^^ Betterly corrected. Counters do not have " Level not Stars. Good for a beginner card maker. I love the image and overall card presentation. There is a thread about card Grammar, it is seeable via the RULES sticky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Oh, sorry I didn't know about the " and level, not stars. I'll fix it.Thankz for commenting my card ^^ - I'll check out the Grammar Thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Great for a first attempt. Really. One of the bests, if not the best, 1st card i've ever seen. Pic is awesome. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thank you, Gijinka! It's really good to know that my first card is one of the bests you've ever seen! ^^Hmm... Are you brazilian? :^D Me too!Maybe I make a set called "The Executors". Would it be a good theme? Thankz ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aldebaram Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 A great card! And this would be a great theme, I would luv if you made a set like tis. :P9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thank you for rating and commenting Aldebaram. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
賢狼ホロ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Just great. Keep up the good work!Love to see a set of this. ; D Great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Alright Heres my little grading system ( Second Attempt at using this system so be nice. xD ) Card Name - 9/10 - Nothings Perfect. [A]Card Effect - 8/10 - Seems good with me. [B]Card's Balance - 9/10 - Nothings Perfect. [A]First Card - 9/10 - Pretty dang good for a first card. [A]Card's Creativity - 9/10 - Nothings Perfect [A]Chance of this being a set - 7/10 - This grade really depends on how far you can take these cards. [B] So overal all you get a 8/10 from me. Very good for your first card, hope you enjoy your time here at YCM. ^-^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thank you guyz! ^^I'll start the set when I have time :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Yes i agree you should make a set with the same idea as this This is really good for your first card ocg is great, glad to see you took advice and checked out the ocg thread Keep up this and you'll do good in R.C section 10/10 beacuse its your first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 I hate to admit it, but this is better than my first card. Well done. You're on my GOOD list this year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thankz you cmcThankz you Oleon *-* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 or more Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Gold Counter on this card (max 3.). You can remove 3 Gold Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. Good OCG for a new memberBit too easy of an effect, but overall great9/10 keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 or more Level 4 or higher Warrior-Type monsters you control. When this card destroys a monster by battle' date=' place 1 Gold Counter on this card (max 3.). You can remove 3 Gold Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Warrior-Type monster from your Graveyard. Good OCG for a new memberBit too easy of an effect, but overall great9/10 keep it up![/quote'] But the actual effect was fixed by Junk Raver O_O Are you sure that your fix is really right? I think a super mod knows what he does ^^But thankz anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 OCG is very good for someone new As for the counter effect, it's a little bit plain but it's balanced out. I would also add an effect for the counter in that you can remove a Gold Counter from the card each time it's about to be destroyed in battle to allow it to stay on the field 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thank you, ragnarok, for commenting and rating my card ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Well, I just think it looks strange but I guess it's correctAnd all cards I have seen that have to be Special summoned have had "his card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except..."But as I said great card! Will you make a set of it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Thankz. Yes, I had wrote this before Junk Raver fix. Was writen "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by tributing 1 or more..." But as Junk Raver fixed this way... I think it's correct.And yez, I'll make a set called "The Executors" When I have time.. Maybe tomorrow. Now I'm too lazy "] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 okay, think it will be great! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Merry Christmas! You looking forward to getting your present raphael? PM me so I can keep your name to give you yarr present. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 @Tomtekorv I hope so, but, if not, this is the life, uh? Nothing is perfect ^^@OleonOk, I PMed you :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bLinD (: Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 Luved it. Amazing for a first attempt.OCG is great.10/10 :DWill love if you make a set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 O_OThank you! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Classic Posted November 13, 2009 Report Share Posted November 13, 2009 For a first attempt ill add a new rating too my list lol 14.8956353/10 Awesome card id luv to c a set of this as previously stated by many people lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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