[TOR] TidesOfRedemption - first cards!

[2Dual]

these are the first cards i made, please help with the ocg!

 

ATK and DEF of this card are both equal to the amount of cards in your Graveyard x300. Once per turn you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard and destroy a face-down Spell or Trap Card on your opponent's side of the field.

1 tuner monster + 1 or more WATER non-tuner monster

As long as this card is on the field, both player must play with their deck turned upside down. Once per turn you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard, if that card is a Spell or Trap Card, you may activated in this turn, if that card is a monster, increase the ATK of this card by 800 points until the end of the turn.

1 tuner monster + 1 or more WATER non-tuner monster

As long as you have at least 10 less cards in your Deck than your opponent, this card can attack twice and cannot be destroyed in battle. Once per turn you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard, if you do that this card gains 500 ATK until the end of the turn.

Once per turn you can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard, if that card is a level 3 or lower monster, you can Special Summon that monster on your side of the field. If this card is destroyed, all the monster Summoned by this card's effect are destroyed and sent to the graveyard.

When this card attack put 1 Tide Counter on this card. When this card has 5 Tide Counters on it, it is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard you may choose and activate one of the following effects: * inflict Direct Damages to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Tide Counters on this card, * send an amount of cards from the top of your Deck to the Graveyard equal to the number of Tide Counter on this card.

 

the main strategy is gaining bonuses by sending the cards at the top of the deck to the graveyard, cards like Urthan and other traps/spell i'll do (if i'll do more), will need a lot of cards in the graveyard and/or few cards in the deck.

 

 

images from "Magic The Gathering".

[.area51player.]

You could write the effect out of some cards.

Found many errors, most of them capitalization :']

But great first cards ^^

7.8/10

[2Dual]

thanks! :D

i added the effects that were a bit hard to read in the card.

i expected to have made errors in capitalization, i still have some probs with it :P

i also noticed a few errors i'll correct.

[.area51player.]

You could read the OCG thread, would help. I read before makin' my first card ^^

[2Dual]

i did it right now, it was really helpful, i was still up to old OCG, i haven't bought yugioh cards in a long time, so i didnt know how effects are now :P

[Cloister]

And It's "Sea-Serpent" not "Sea Serpent"

7/10

[Metal Skull]

7.5/10

I mean this is OK but COULD HAVE SOME fixes to kick ass.

[ragnarok1945]

your OCG for the most part is still good

 

Besides, most of the effects are well balanced out and I see no corrections needed

 

8/10

[Canadian]

These people should read EVERY card before commenting.

 

All in all:

Iffy pics, some were good but others were .. you know.

Great effects. I especially liked Inkraft's, it was very OG (origional)

And the fact that you made Sea Serpents made me smile cause alot of people don't.

Cool cards.

 

9.5/10

 

It reminded me of an aqua lightsworn deck. :>

Keep up the good work.