Mintcookie Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 [spoiler=Super Rare]1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monstersThis card is not destroyed by Dragon-Type monsters. When this card destroys a Dragon-Type monster, equip the destroyed monster to this card and treat it as an Equip Card. While equipped to this card, increase the ATK of this card x250. (1 monster can only be equipped with this card at a time. If this card is destroyed by battle, destroyed the equipped monster instead.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Lots of OCG errors, just change the wording so it makes sense. It's balanced and it's an ok pic so I'd give it a 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Like said above OCG errors. I dont know what he meant by ALOT i see one or two . I will attempt to help. "it is treated as" not "treat it as an" it is BY 250 not x250 (unless you meant like level x 250 in which case OPD) Other then that looks ok. I personally dont like the pic so much because it is tilted but thats a me being a right angle sorta guy. You win a 8/10 or a B if you are into letter grades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 pic is weirdit doesn't look like stone.....it's ok 6.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frozen Judgment Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 There are more... They're small and hard to notice but there are a lot. Heres an OCG fix: 1 Dragon-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Dragon-Type monstersThis card cannot be destroyed by Dragon-Type monsters. When this card destroys a Dragon-Type monster, equip the destroyed monster to this card (This part is not needed so I got rid of it for you.). While this card is equipped with a card, increase the ATK of this card by 250 (There can only be 1 card equipped to this card at a time. If this card is destroyed by battle, destroyed the equipped monster instead.) The last sentence needed A LOT of fixing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 @ octoberon: Not to be a flamer of new guys. Love that your here but we like to give constructive criticism to a creator. Pic is weird is more of an opinion and unless the NAME IS EXCESSIVELY off we dont mess with it (i.e. if there was a card called SUPER DRAGON but the pic was of a puppy then you can say the pic doesnt suit the name) But for this card where the dragon has stones on it and is an earth type we tend to leave it be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Can't see the card??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 First sentence should be This card cannot be destroyed by a Dragon type monster and the atk gain of this card, are you insane? 2500 * 250 = 625000, you tell me what kind of card can stand up to that much atk 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 First sentence should be This card cannot be destroyed by a Dragon type monster and the atk gain of this card' date=' are you insane? 2500 * 250 = 625000, you tell me what kind of card can stand up to that much atk 6/10[/quote'] Not multiplying -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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