demopoulaki Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 If I have any ocg errors, which I probably do, please tell me what they are so that I get better at writing the card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheVaron Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 good work for a new member. A little OVER POWERED. Maybe switch it to half your life points instead of 4G. Uhhhhmmmmmmmmmmm maybe if you dont finish him that turn you lose? Idk 9/10 great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 good card9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Quite a powerful card. (Lightsworns and Blackwings automatically come to mind for abuse). The image is awesome. The OCG does need work. Lemme see: This card can only be activated if you control 5 face-up monsters with the same Attribute. Pay 4000 Life Points. All monsters you control can attack your opponent directly and are unaffected by your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards until the End Phase. (Might not be perfect - don't quote me on this). Overall, this is an interesting card. (Wonders about Scapegoat abuse :P). Hope you can keep your LP high enough to pull this card off. I'm gonna go with a 8.5/10 on this one. Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 UP, reduce pay to 2000 since your opponent must have a number of monsters.8/10Balance it and ill give 9/10Nice idea^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Wow, and you're fairly new. This is a pro made card. I give 9.8/9.9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 First sentence should be This card can only be activated when you control 5 monsters of the same attribute Given the 4000 LP pay, I guess it balances it out, but it still borders the OPed end 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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