barbaritoanthony@yahoocom Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 I'm currently trying to make an entire deck based on the halo series here is my first 3 cards after 2 days of thinking what to makei kinda messed up posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 I know you're new, but there are several problems with these cards so far. I'll try to help you with these. Sargeant Johnson:-The image could have a more interesting background-Overpowered. You only need 1 Tribute to Summon something that has extremely high stats, and cannot be destroyed by battle. Not to mention that it's only Level 6 (normally, Level 6s have stats between 1900-2400). ODST Soldier:-Try to use an image that isn't so realistic.-The effect has OCG (Official Card Grammar) errors. Here is a fixed version:"You can Tribute 5 "ODST soldiers", including this card, to Special Summon 1 "Sargeant Johnson" from your hand or Deck."-The DEF is a tad too high for its Level. Having it at 2400 would be decent. Master Chief:- I do not see the reason to Tribute 3 monsters that combine to have such high stats to Summon something that has inferior ones.-Lists of Fusion-Material Monsters are like this:"Sargeant Johnson" + "Sargeant Johnson" + "Sargeant Johnson"-Could do with an effect that has a catch. So there you go. Here is some constructive criticism that you can take note of, and possibly change from. 3/10 so far. If you want more help, you can PM me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lilmantoot Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Even though i'm not a big fan of halo these are some nice cards9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windpepper Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Hm, I'm making a Halo set at the moment too. Overpowered, bad ocg, bad pics, but a good try for your first cards, 6/10. You can PM me as well if you need help, as I am in the process of making a Halo set. Also, I don't get why you would have to fuse three "Sergeant Johnsons" to make Master Chief. Just doesn't make much sense. The ODST's effect doesn't make much sense either, as Sergeant Johnson is not an ODST, nor an ODST commander. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recteik Shade Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 to put it simply, Needs Work!but i like the concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minymm Posted November 25, 2009 Report Share Posted November 25, 2009 HAHAHAHAHA I LOVE THE CARD REQUIREMENT FOR MASTER CHEIF!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAoh btw... how are you going to get 3 sargent johnson's on the field LAWL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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