my first card

[crocruler]

this is my firt card. can u have alook at it?

[Canadian]

Thumbnails, AHHH!

[crocruler]

can someone please say something about it, not ahh thumbnails?

[Metal Skull]

Don't use attachments.

When on card maker click on the card and copy past the code that appears down the card to you thread.

[~Wright~]

 

1. Never use attachments. Click on the card you made, and copy and paste the code onto this page. :)

 

2. Post the effects of your cards next to the cards themselves, it's hard to read the writing on some cards.

 

3. OCG (Official Card Grammar) fix.

You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing a non-DARK monster in your Graveyard from play. When this card is destroyed, add 1 "Final Prophecy" or "Apocalypto, Death of the Universes" from your Deck to your hand.

 

special summon= Special Summon

dark= DARK

graveyard= Graveyard

Add 1 "insert name", "insert name, or "insert name" from your Deck to your hand.

 

4. Awesome first card! :D Much better than mine, imo. The only problem is I don't know what final prophecy and the other card are. The summoning conditions are fair, and the OCG errors are minor.

 

5. The picture is a bit overused, I have seen it many times. There are several good sources for pictures, including:

deviantart,

photobucket,

and the showcase section on this site.

You should usually be able to find a picture that fits your needs from one of these 3 free sources. :) Also, look at the links in my signature, you should find the last one helpful. :)

 

6. In the name, capitalize the first letters of every word, except and, the, of, etc. Your name is very good as well, but it should look like

Messiah of the Apocalypse.

 

7. For your first card, I give it a 10/10. :D

[ragnarok1945]

please do not make attachments

 

For the card itself, it's a simple but searching type effect, which makes it balanced out

 

8/10

[kingdom01]

nice card, good work keep it up here is a +rep from me