livinlifejb Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 i'm starting a new set. i know my OCG is bad. i'm not sure what constitutes as "good OCG" but i do my best. so if you must rate the ocg go ahead. well here it is, the first card in a new set of spirits. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Boss :) Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Why did you put a counter spellcard? Also don´t put " Also your opponent" just put "Your opponent". Well, overall, it isn´t to bad. Keep going with that set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bott52 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 It cannot be just a Spirit effect type because Spirit is already a type (EX: Yamata Dragon/ Dragon/Spirit-type) You need to make it just Warrior / Spirit / Effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 1ST Card - Good name, and the pic suits well with it."Your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each Spirit-Type monster in your Graveyard. Your opponent can draw 3 cards from his/her deck." - I think it's OP'd for your opponent, and UP'd for you. Because your opponent can draw 3 cards every turn. You could say "When this card is activated, your opponent can draw 3 cards. Your opponent loses 200 Life Points for each Spirit-Type monster in your Graveyard."2ND Card - GREAT pic, but would be better with a background ^^ - Please, post the effect out of the card, it's hard to read.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 I go with raphael Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bott52 Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 The first one's effect should be "When this card is activated your opponent may draw 3 cards. For each "Spirit monster in your graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent x 200. "The second cars type should be Warrior / Spirit / Effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Deleted cards !____! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windpepper Posted November 14, 2009 Report Share Posted November 14, 2009 Cards aren't there. Somebody lock this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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