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GHX( Gemini HX ) Set [5/35]


SupaGreenMushroom

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Yeh, ma first set.

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Lore:"Blazewing Butterfly" + "Future Samurai"

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard.While this card is face-up on the field, normal summon it to have it treated as an effect monster with this effect:

This card canot be destroyed except by the effects of a card.It is immune to all other effects and normal attacks.

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This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be Special Summoned by the effects of "Raging Battle".Also,

this card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard.While face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

Once per turn, you may do 500 LP damage to your opponent.You may not set trap or spell cards the turn you activate this effect.

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[spoiler=Other Cards]

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Yeh, I have a new Gemini deck.

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A few pointers for the first card:

-First of all, make it only one type, or include the additional types in the effect with "This card is also treated as a *-type monster." * is/are the type(s)

-Capitalize Graveyard.

-Put spaces after periods and commas. Those are simple typing rules.

-The OCG is mediocre. Here is the correct way it should be written:

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to treat it as an Effect Monster with this effect:

This card cannot be destroyed except by card effects.

Overall: 5/10

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A few pointers for the first card:

-First of all' date=' make it only one type, or include the additional types in the effect with "This card is also treated as a *-type monster." * is/are the type(s)

-Capitalize Graveyard.

-Put spaces after periods and commas. Those are simple typing rules.

-The OCG is mediocre. Here is the correct way it should be written:

[i']This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to treat it as an Effect Monster with this effect:

This card cannot be destroyed except by card effects.[/i]

Overall: 5/10

 

This.

But don't need to capitalizate graveyard. It's right this way ^^

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