SupaGreenMushroom Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Yeh, ma first set.[spoiler=Monsters] Lore:"Blazewing Butterfly" + "Future Samurai"This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard.While this card is face-up on the field, normal summon it to have it treated as an effect monster with this effect:This card canot be destroyed except by the effects of a card.It is immune to all other effects and normal attacks.This card cannot be normal summoned or set.This card can only be Special Summoned by the effects of "Raging Battle".Also,this card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the graveyard.While face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect: Once per turn, you may do 500 LP damage to your opponent.You may not set trap or spell cards the turn you activate this effect. [spoiler=Other Cards] Yeh, I have a new Gemini deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kiyo Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 A few pointers for the first card:-First of all, make it only one type, or include the additional types in the effect with "This card is also treated as a *-type monster." * is/are the type(s)-Capitalize Graveyard.-Put spaces after periods and commas. Those are simple typing rules.-The OCG is mediocre. Here is the correct way it should be written:This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to treat it as an Effect Monster with this effect:This card cannot be destroyed except by card effects.Overall: 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Blurry PIC.Bad OCG.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 A few pointers for the first card:-First of all' date=' make it only one type, or include the additional types in the effect with "This card is also treated as a *-type monster." * is/are the type(s)-Capitalize Graveyard.-Put spaces after periods and commas. Those are simple typing rules.-The OCG is mediocre. Here is the correct way it should be written:[i']This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to treat it as an Effect Monster with this effect:This card cannot be destroyed except by card effects.[/i]Overall: 5/10 This. But don't need to capitalizate graveyard. It's right this way ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 don't put insect AND pyro into the types Just state one, then in the text state it's also treated as the other Rarely see a fusion monster treated as a normal monster, so that's unique OCG correction is up, so this gets 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaGreenMushroom Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Well, at lest i tried "^.^ Also, i has a new gemini deck i got for my b-day, so the cards used to make Blazing Scorpion were actually official cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaGreenMushroom Posted November 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 new cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 22, 2009 Report Share Posted November 22, 2009 mind telling us what cards you updated? If it's Raging Battle one, that pic is TOO realistic, but I do understand why it's blurry The effect for it remains too boring though 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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