Advanced Dark Magician

[Earthbound God]

 

Effect:This card is treated a normal monster in your graveyard, hand, and field. You may summon this monster again from the field to activate this effect. When your opponent attacks your "Advanced Dark Magician". You may summon a "Wizard Token" In defense position "Spellcaster" "LV 3" "Dark" "ATK 700" "DEF 500" for each 1000 ATK for the attacking monster. And make the attack directed to the "Wizard Token". For each "Wizard Token" destroyed you opponent loses 400 Life Points.

 

 

What do ya think?

 

- Anything wrong? Just post it. P.S. I know its first part is gemini like but i know what im doing.

- Too OP? Just tell and post.

[Kiyo]

The OCG is terrible, no offense. Capitalize "Graveyard", turn "may" into "can", and the first bit should go something like: "This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up in your control and in the Graveyard. While this card is on the field, you can Normal Summon it to treat it as an Effect Monster with this effect:". Also, Token details are always in brackets "()" and use slashes in between items. A few more OCG and punctuation errors as well.

Also, I guess the pic is okay, and I don't really think it's OPed.

Overall: 6.5/10

[Bengal]

OCG fix:

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field, or in your hand or Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

• When your opponent selects this card as an attack target, you can Special Summon a number of "Wizard Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 700/DEF 500) equal to each 1000 ATK of the attacking monster in Defense Position and switch the attack target to 1 "Wizard Token". Each time a "Wizard Token" is destroyed, you opponent loses 400 Life Points.

 

Not bad, the image isn't the greatest since it is of DM and is a bit blurry.

 

Also, I know you said you know what you are doing, but why not just make it a Gemini?

 

I think that it should be changes so just 1 token is Summoned, since the 1000 ATK thing is kind of broken. The ATK and DEF should also be lowered, as the effect is too powerful to merit ATK and DEF that high.

 

6.5/10

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

OCG fix:

 

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field' date=' or in your hand or Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:

• When your opponent selects this card as an attack target, you can Special Summon a number of "Wizard Tokens" (Spellcaster-Type/DARK/Level 3/ATK 700/DEF 500) equal to each 1000 ATK of the attacking monster in Defense Position and switch the attack target to 1 "Wizard Token". Each time a "Wizard Token" is destroyed, you opponent loses 400 Life Points.

 

Not bad, the image isn't the greatest since it is of DM and is a bit blurry.

 

Also, I know you said you know what you are doing, but why not just make it a Gemini?

 

I think that it should be changes so just 1 token is Summoned, since the 1000 ATK thing is kind of broken. The ATK and DEF should also be lowered, as the effect is too powerful to merit ATK and DEF that high.

 

6.5/10

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I agree with this correction

C is my rating

[Metal Skull]

7/10

[ragnarok1945]

the 1000 atk effect makes it too powerful

 

also you should have put some token restrictions to better balance it out

 

7/10