~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Abuses beasts for huge benefits.If your opponent declares an attack, Tribute 1 Beast-Type monster you control and destroy the attacking monster. You can remove from play 1 Beast-Type monster from your Graveyard to inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent. Beast-Type monsters you control can attack twice per Battle Phase. Each time a Beast-Type monster attacks, place 1 Strain Counter on it (max 2.) if a Beast-Type monster has 2 Strain Counters on it, destroy it, and take damage equal to half of its original ATK. Please rate and give lots of critique! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blamonchesix Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 I like it. Its OP but the cost seems fair. 9.5/10. (^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 thanks. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 OP.But creative.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Can you give more detailed critique please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightmare drake Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 good card9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Great pic, magicthekid =pSee no errors =] 9.2/10 And... nightmare drake.... PLEASE, DO NOT SPAMMMM!!!I see, and all, I say, ALL your comments are :"good card (copy the rate of user above)"--` Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Thank you, but could you please give more detailed critique? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.area51player. Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Sure.I found one error, now."Each time a Beast-Type monster attacks, place 1 Strain Counter on it."Hmm. You forgot to say how much is the max counters you can place on the card.Each time a Beast-Type monster attacks, place 1 Strain Counter on it (max 2.). I think it`s all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Corrections made. More critiques please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 OCG looks just fine the way it is the cost makes it balanced, still seems to border the OPed end just a little 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Thanks Ragnarok. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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