Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Another card from my Mystic Creatures SetLore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Level 6 Dragon-Type monsters from your field to the Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the effects of all Warrior-Type monsters are negated. This card cannot be selected as an attack target if there is another EARTH monster on the field. If this card is destroyed, remove it from play to select and activate 1 of the following effects:● Inflict 1000 direct damage to your opponents Life Points● Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard● Negate the effect of 1 monster your opponent controls. I've first think to make it's name to Crystal Dragon but no V.I.E.S. is betterDo you know for what the name V.I.E.S.?(if someone knows the answer then tell me) Card pic changed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Hopefully correct OCG:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 2 Level 6 Dragon-Type monsters from your field to the Graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters are negated. This card cannot be selected as an attack target if there is another EARTH monster on the field. If this card is destroyed, remove it from play to select and activate 1 of the following effects: ● Halve your opponents Life Points ● Special Summon 1 Level 5 or lower Dragon-Type monster from your Graveyard ● Negate the effect of 1 monster your opponent controls. [spoiler=Card with corrected OCG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 thanks for the fix HP doom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 P.S. why you don't posted a rating?:cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DOOM Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Sorry forgot that^^I like the effect, it's well balnced thus it's hard Summoning Conditions. Pic is ok, so 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 c'mon people please posti've really try to make this card my best so please comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Aiku: V.I.E.S can meaning in French "cours des vies" translation; "the courses through lives".V = VolatilleI = InterferenceE = EnemyS = SoldierYou can't say I tried! XD OCG: Already corrected and no needs of supervision. Effect: The effect is very strange. It doesn't stand on a solid ground and the effects are just their to make the card strong. When creating a card, it's necessary to have an effect which is their for a reason and that the effect as a specific meaning to the card. This card's effects only meaning is just their to be strong and make your opponent mad. Nothing else. Image and Name: Though I'm not sure if Aiku's deducton is correct, I'll say that the name is somewhat interresting. The image is good too, but I saw it a lot of time. However not enough to call this image overused. Overall: 5.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 i've change the picture Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 The pic looks more like a DARK Dragon.The effect negates itselfs making it an everlasting spiral of negating and releasing it's effect."the effects of all Dragon-Type monsters are negated." so this means it's effect is also negated.After you've fixed that, I have to say, the first of his choise effects is to OP, just make it max 1000 damage.A 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 ok i'll change that with the Dragon_type think and the other thingEffect fix'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 glad to see you changed halving your opponent's LP to just 1000 burn otherwise it'd be OPed. The rest of the effect is fine, though the pic is slightly overused 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted November 15, 2009 Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 Ah, nice it's fixed, now a 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 15, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 15, 2009 thanks to all of you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Final Changes:1-Pic changed2-Level changed3-OCG corrected4-Added a red borderand the meaning of V.I.E.S. is:VirtualImmortalEnergySoul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 hmmthe effect mainly is a row of a few nice effects..But that isnt that..what makes a card good .. Anyways..Nice pic..the effect is useful i guess..The balance could be better.The summoning conditions do balance it out..but the most effects only work when the monster you Triubuted 2 monsters for is removed from play (by you)...i dunno..But a good card8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded23 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 nice pic 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted November 18, 2009 Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 You have got the correct OCG fix. Other than that, this card is rather splendid! I really do like its effect that jams Warriors. Haven't had much problems with those, but it was an interesting twist for a dragon card. The effect is well thought out and interesting to read. Good job. P. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted November 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 thanks Lord Ursus P.S. BUMP!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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