Epic Special Pack

[Lachesis]

These cards have nothing to do with one another unless specified, i just needed a small break from Legion, which will continue later this week.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore: Helena - Archangel of Time]1 "Angel Helena" + 1 more non-Tuner monster.

Once per 4 turns, you can remove from play the monster with the highest ATK in your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field. This monster can only be selected as an attack target every 2 turns.

 

[Scyire]

I like the shinyness of the cards. I must admit, they are good for a new member. There are still large OCG mistakes though.

 

3/5

[GunMetalDevil]

these are pretty good. pics are fine. only a few OCG errors:

 

This monster may only attack and be attacked every 2 turns.

change to:

This monster can only attack and be selected as an attack target every 2 turns.

 

if this card defeats another monster

change to:

if this card destroys a monster as a result of battle

 

change those and its a 9.5/10 from me

[ragnarok1945]

it's Winged Beast, not Winged-Beast, remove that -

 

change may to can

 

Your Synchro monster is considered to be balanced, but since REAL synchros are supposed to be OPed, this is considered UPed

 

8/10

[Metal Skull]

Are u kidding???

What means odd number???

Effects are OK.

Nice card for newbie^^

8.5/10

[-DOOM]

Odd means for example 3,5,7,9,11,13,15 ...... know what i mean?

Maybe change this:

Remove the monster with the highest ATK in your graveyard from play to destroy one monster on the field. This effect may only be used once every 4 turns.

to that?

Once per 4 turns, you can remove from play the monster with the highest ATK in your Graveyard to destroy 1 monster on the field.

(i hope this is right)

 

Other OCG errors were corrected above.

 

Good pics, holo is a bit too weak in my opinion, so 8/10