Limited Edition KING Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 [align=center]Now before you all ask YES this is Majestic Fairy Fana the Spear just with an edited name and effect. This is the new version of the monster that I made seeing as the old version was similar to Blackwing Bora the Spear and the effect was bland. Anyways Rate/Hate/Love/ Fix OCG and comment! When this card attacks a set monster, flip it into face-up Defense Position. During battle between this attacking card and a face-up Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent increase your Life Points by the amount of damage inflicted. If a monster this card attacks has a higher DEF than the ATK of this card you can Tribute 1 Fairy-Type monster you control to destroy the monster. Expect more soon[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos Flame Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Pretty good. I can't see any OCG errors. Balanced effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 Just one question. When I attack the Set Monster, is the set monster's flip effect working (if that card have a flip effect)? Is this card negate the Flip Effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 When this card attacks a Set monster, flip it into face-up Defense Position (Flip Effects are not activated.)... ..If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent gain Life Points equal to the amount of damage your opponent took. If this card attacks a monster whose DEF is higher than the ATK of this card, you can Tribute 1 Fairy-Type monster you control to destroy the targeted monster. I think it's a little overpowered, so you may want to add a Fairy-Type Tribute. Also, the picture and effect suggest a Fairy/Warrior dual-type. A good idea, but the effect could be easily abused. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Skull Posted November 16, 2009 Report Share Posted November 16, 2009 No OCG errors.Balanced Effect.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 even with the last effect of changing it from one monster to one fairy type monster, the effect is still on the OPed end I'd change the piercing damage effect in that it only gains it when ALL of the monsters on your opponent's side of the field are in defense position 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Monsters when attacked are already flipped. Therefore this is only effective on a small targeted cards that work specifically when face-up. But those are few and far between. Thus, the first line is kinda not good... The last one is rather bleh, underpowering the effect. Possibly changing it to removing from play Fairy's in your grave instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted November 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Pretty good. I can't see any OCG errors. Balanced effect. 9/10 Thank you! :) Just one question. When I attack the Set Monster' date=' is the set monster's flip effect working (if that card have a flip effect)? Is this card negate the Flip Effect?[/quote'] It will negate it if I use Max Darkness OCG fix which I probably will. When this card attacks a Set monster' date=' flip it into face-up Defense Position [b'](Flip Effects are not activated.)[/b]... ..If this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent gain Life Points equal to the amount of damage your opponent took. If this card attacks a monster whose DEF is higher than the ATK of this card, you can Tribute 1 Fairy-Type monster you control to destroy the targeted monster. I think it's a little overpowered, so you may want to add a Fairy-Type Tribute. Also, the picture and effect suggest a Fairy/Warrior dual-type. A good idea, but the effect could be easily abused. 8/10 Thank you for the OCG fix I will try to make it less Overpowered when I re-try it again :/ No OCG errors.Balanced Effect.9/10 Thanks! :) even with the last effect of changing it from one monster to one fairy type monster' date=' the effect is still on the OPed end I'd change the piercing damage effect in that it only gains it when ALL of the monsters on your opponent's side of the field are in defense position 8/10[/quote'] Hmm good idea I might use it or make it something completely different. Monsters when attacked are already flipped. Therefore this is only effective on a small targeted cards that work specifically when face-up. But those are few and far between. Thus' date=' the first line is kinda not good... The last one is rather bleh, underpowering the effect. Possibly changing it to removing from play Fairy's in your grave instead?[/quote'] I like that idea it adds that sort if Chaos feeling I certainly think about it. Thank you all for the help :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.