Olafurkr Posted November 17, 2009 Report Share Posted November 17, 2009 Here it is Aw man. Beginner problems. I'm sorry. It's supposed to be Zero and Massimo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stoopid1 Posted November 18, 2009 Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 Aw man. Beginner problems. I'm sorry. It's supposed to be Zero and Massimo Sorry, but there's a lot more issues than that: Fake types, even tho they could easily be classified as Machine-Type. (This one is discretionary tho, so whatever) Circulation text is meant for terms like "First Edition," not a brief description of who the card is, like "The main character. Duh." Effect monsters and Spell cards shouldn't have pointless text, like "Yep it's X allright." Most of em are blatently over-powered, such as Cinnamon giving you 5000 Life points. Imagine having a card like that in a "Sanctuary in the Sky" deck. Double-posted images, Axl and Marino. One image isn't showing at all, which is probly Zero. You can fix that very easily. Lastly, a lot of unofficial card grammar. X Ultimate Armor for example would be properly written like this. "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing "X" and paying 4000 Life Points. This card cannot be destroyed by battle." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olafurkr Posted November 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 Yeah sorry about these mistakes still learning the right descriptions and such AND making images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted November 18, 2009 Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 (Facepalm) bad pics and way bad OCG.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ĎλЯклξššζ Posted November 18, 2009 Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 Wrong section....... These are pop culture cards........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olafurkr Posted November 18, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2009 Wrong section....... These are pop culture cards........... Well don't blame ME! I am STILL a new user here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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