SK8TR»���» Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 [align=center]Your opponent cannot select another Warrior-Type monster you control as an attack target. All Warrior monsters on the field gain 300 ATK points. Any Monster this card attack's cannot attack the following turn.If this card's ATK goes over 3000 it is Destroyed. [/align] I plan on elaborating on this effect a lot more. Just wanna see the Initial Reaction'sEdit 1: Added ATK Limit and Toned down her ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 This card is a bit overpowered. It has 2500 ATK (including the effect of it giving all warrior type monsters a 300 ATK boost) and that it can stun any monster it attacks regardless of what they are and their ATK and DEF. It's basically a Command Knight and a Marauding Captain combined, which that makes out to be a pretty cheap combo. You should make the effect of it giving out ATK to warrior type monsters not work on this card so it odesn't have the ATK of a Summoned Skull. Overall, the picture is great but the effect is still a bit debatable for me. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I'd drop its original ATK to 1900 so the boost doesn't make it a Monarch-killer, but otherwise is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tortoise Kyle Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 Seems like a good card. I'll give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 this is OPed, since it'll jump to 2500 atk right away The fact that it can stop any monster from attacking for a turn regardless of its stats makes it like a Command Knight's effect, but much stronger I'd change the effect so that only warrior monsters with 1500 atk or less will get the 300 atk boost 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I understand what all of you are saying I will change it ASAP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 i think it should be:"While this card is face-up on the field, your opponent cannot select any Warrior-Type monster you control as a target of an attack [I would add 'other than this card]. All Warrior-Type monsters on the field gain 300 ATK. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls, the attacked monster cannot attack on your opponent's next Battle Phase."Maybe drop its ATK to 1900 or so.Anyway nice card, even if the effect isn't that original IMO. 6.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 i think it should be:"While this card is face-up on the field' date=' your opponent cannot select any Warrior-Type monster you control as a target of an attack [s']I would add 'other than this card[/s] It's like that on Marading Captain And he is the best card wen running warrior Deck . All Warrior-Type monsters on the field gain 300 ATK. When this card attacks a monster your opponent controls, the attacked monster cannot attack on your opponent's next Battle Phase."Maybe drop its ATK to 1900 or so.1900 Would be no point because it would only have 2200 ATK which means what is the point.Also having a 2300 ATK is higher burden becuase there is many +800 Equip spells but not that many +700 Equip Spells.Anyway nice card, even if the effect isn't that original IMO. 6.5/10. Aight den. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robkill13 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 personally its not that overpowered in my opinion when now a dayz blackwings get 5 monsters out in 1 turn. id rate this 8/10. cool idea and nice pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Thnx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 OCG fix: "Your opponent cannot select another Warrior-Type monster you control as an attack target. All Warrior-Type monsters on the field gain 300 ATK. A monster attacked by this card cannot declare an attack during it's controller's next turn. If this card's ATK is 3000 or higher, it is destroyed. Now it's technically perfect. Some of the wording was taken from the text of Harpie Lady 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 OCG fix: "Your opponent cannot select another Warrior-Type monster you control as an attack target. All Warrior-Type monsters on the field gain 300 ATK. A monster attacked by this card cannot declare an attack during it's controller's next turn No. This implies that this card can only Attack once per turn which if able to can. Having an "A" there would be singular and if she attack's twice it would change to "Any". But '"Any" Cover's Singular and plural. If this card's ATK is 3000 or higher' date=' it is destroyed. Now it's technically perfect. Some of the wording was taken from the text of Harpie Lady 3.[/quote'] Any way thnx for Nothing/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 The effect isn't very origional in that it basically combines other cards but it's fair considering the card itself. The pic is actually pretty nice. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 And can you tell me what card in YGO has this effect. And I know the first part is from Marauding Captain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Command Knight increases the ATK of warrior-type monsters. Albet slightly higer increase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SK8TR»���» Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Ok but is that the main effect?No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KurashiDragon Posted November 21, 2009 Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 Second or last effect. What does it matter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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