The0 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 [spoiler=[b]Ultimate Dark Wizard Of The Mysteries[/b]]Effect :This card cannot be Normal Sumoned or Set, this card can be only Special Summoned from your Graveyard by a tributing up to 5 monsters you control. Increase the ATK of this card by 800 and the DEF by 500 for each monster used to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can send one card you control to the Graveyard to place 1 Spell Counter on this card (Max: 3). You can remove 1 Spell Counters from this card to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until your end phase. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 1 "Ultimate Dark Wizard Of The mysteries" from your Deck. If you do, the ATK and the DEF of this card becomes 2500 , Destroy all the cards on your side of the field has the 2nd end phase after the destruction of this monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I don't understand what you meant by 1 has 5 monsters Please explain that part first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 "this card can be only special summoned from your graveyard by a tributing of 1 has 5 monsters". Maybe his mean is this: "this card can be only special summoned from your graveyard by a tributing 1 OR 5 monsters". So if there is 5 monster in your hand, this monster can have:ATK 800 x 5= 4000 & DEF 500 x 5= 2500. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Horrible grammar. Forget OCG, you don't even know subject-verb agreement. Please make sense of this card before I rate. And if this is your best card, I'm scared to see your others. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chex Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 First fix your OCG then I'll grade if I'm on once it is fixed because I don't understand basically like almost half of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 ok , my OCG is not good because i'm french ^^ sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Oleon~ Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 ... This would be a perfect moment to do it so I will.[spoiler= thing I choose to do] Cue cricket sound...and...action! 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Sumonned or set, this card can be only Special Summoned from your Graveyard by a tributing up to 5 monsters you control. Increase the ATK of this card by 800 and the DEF by 500 for each monster used to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can send one card you control to the Graveyard to add one Spell counter on this card (Max: 3). You can remove 1 Spell counters from this car to increse the ATK of this card by 500. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard or deck. Im sure this is what he ment if that be the case its an OK card its good for a new Member i would make it so you have to remove 2 Spell counters to increse and change the Spell counters max to 2 and i would make it 2 Level 4 or lower with 1500 ATK or less or just one Level 4 monster 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baltoli Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 ???What does the effect mean. OH MY GOD!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=^.^= Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Hello i think my Corection makes some sence to what hes trying to say Here it is againThis card cannot be Normal Sumonned or set, this card can be only Special Summoned from your Graveyard by a tributing up to 5 monsters you control. Increase the ATK of this card by 800 and the DEF by 500 for each monster used to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can send one card you control to the Graveyard to add one Spell counter on this card (Max: 3). You can remove 1 Spell counters from this car to increse the ATK of this card by 500. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard or deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Hmm 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 destron, get a life. Seriously, I am sick and tired of people saying such things to new members. They are new, and what should be expected from them is not what you would expect a renowned card maker to do, but from what should be expected from new members. Most of them will have OCG errors, so live with it. Either give them useful advice or don't comment at all. The card: I think this card is very good, seeing that you are so new and french to boot. Correct OCG: This card cannot be Normal Sumonned or Set, this card can be only Special Summoned from your Graveyard by a tributing up to 5 monsters you control. Increase the ATK of this card by 800 and its DEF by 500 for each monster used to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can send one card you control to the Graveyard to place one Spell Counter on this card (Max: 3). You can remove 1 Spell counters from this card to increase its ATK by 500. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Graveyard or Deck. The card is somewhat balanced, but you should probably make it so that it only Special Summons a monster when it is destroyed battle. Plus, given your situation with english, you did a spectacular job! Good work! G. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I AM BIB Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Some OCG Errors, But good effect, But shouldn't the level be higher than 6? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Thx all ! =) i have corrected my OCG and change the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Correct OCG now: This card cannot be Normal Sumoned or Set, this card can be only Special Summoned from your Graveyard by a tributing up to 5 monsters you control. Increase the ATK of this card by 800 and the DEF by 500 for each monster used to Special Summon this card. Once per turn, you can send one card you control to the Graveyard to place 1 Spell Counter on this card (Max: 3). You can remove 1 Spell Counters from this card to increase the ATK of this card by 500 until your end phase. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard or your Deck. If you do, the ATK and the DEF of this card becomes 2500. Now it's just overpowered. One destroyed and you can summon 2 more plus itself from your Deck and all of them with 2500 ATK and DEF? Sheesh. Restrict it a lot, lot more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 now its better ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destron Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 OCG isn't perfect, but it is so much better. When this card is destroyed you can Special Summon this card from your Graveyard or your Deck. Take this out' date=' it makes it OP'd. It's not bad if you disregard this sentence. [b']7/10[/b] destron' date=' get a life.[/quote'] Lol, you're funny. I'm the guy who believes treating noobs like babies is discrimination, no matter how harsh it is. Granted, I didn't know this guy was French, but you can't tell me to get a life for wanting to treat everyone fairly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazin Kay Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Horrible grammar. Forget OCG' date=' you don't even know subject-verb agreement. Please make sense of this card before I rate. And if this is your best card, I'm scared to see your others.[/quote'] This. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The0 Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 OK thank you, I changed just a little my effect, said I of what you think of it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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