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[The Last Dragon of Seraphic Order] - Comment Please!


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This is my first realistic card i made.

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The Last Dragon of Seraphic Order OLD:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 1 card left in your Deck. Return 10 cards from your Graveyard into your Deck when this card summoned in Face-up attack position.

 

The Last Dragon of Seraphic Order NEW:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 10 or less card left in your Deck. Return 10 cards from your Graveyard into your Deck when this card summoned in Face-up attack position.

 

Send your lovely comment on this card & the imba issue or OCG correctness is you like.

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OCG seems fine.

For a level 12 with no positive effect i think 5000 atk and def is pretty fair.

Pic is overused and its effect doesn't make it a particular card or anything, maybe you should drop its atk and def and add an effect that may help you if you have only 1 card left in your deck.

something like "Once per turn you can Tribute this face-up card from your field to add 10 cards from your Graveyard to your Deck and shuffle it." anyway it should help not to end the cards to draw.

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OK! Done editing!

 

Refer to Pic 02 from above.

 

"This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 1 card left in your Deck. Return 10 cards from your Graveyard into your Deck when this card summoned in Face-up attack position."

 

I didn't know the pic is overused, so i change it. You are right about the effect. IF the player had to undergo long battle & just have 1 card left on the Deck, he/she doesn't need a strong monster, he/she need MORE CARD in his/her DECK!

 

So i lower it ATK/DEF & add new effect. :D

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This pic is already use to? Man!

 

Btw pokemon 8548, what do you think about the usefulness of this card in real world TCG? I for myself think this card is not-in-my-deck card type. Usually people created deck with 1-hit-kill deck type, and this card is not very favorable for card players.

 

Maybe this card is useful for deck-destroyer deck type or deck-virus type.

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I make a few change for this card. "1 card left in deck" effect is too impractical, so i change it. And because the effect is changed, i lower the monster lv & ATK/DEF.

 

The Last Dragon of Seraphic Order OLD:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 1 card left in your Deck. Return 10 cards from your Graveyard into your Deck when this card summoned in Face-up attack position.

 

The Last Dragon of Seraphic Order NEW:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by having exactly 10 or less card left in your Deck. Return 10 cards from your Graveyard into your Deck when this card summoned in Face-up attack position.

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