~Wright~ Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 I got an awesome name that I really like from one of the commenters, so I'm using that one. Thanks. :D[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters. This gains ATK equal to its Level x300. You can reduce the Level of this card by 2 to reduce the Level of an "Ancient Gear" monster in your hand by 2. During your Standby Phase, reduce the Level of this card by 2. Once per turn, you can Special Summon an "Ancient Gear" monster from your Graveyard by reducing this card's Level by the Level of the selected monster +2. If this card's Level cannot be reduced during your Standby Phase, destroy it.. Lots and lots of critique would be very much appreciated. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 many of the Ancient Gear monsters are already to your opponent's spells/trap during the battle phase, adding in the monster effects makes it OPed in addition, if you're going to lower the atk by 2, you should also lower the atk power as well, don't want to have a lv2 monster with 3000 atk do we? 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zemener Azon Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 How about "Ancient Gear - Level Grinder" or something like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 Kay, I'll put on more limits. Thanks ragnarok. Lots and Lots of changes have been made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
usetheforcehan Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 "Ancient Gear Degrade Beta" or "Jet Black Metallic Gear". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 19, 2009 Report Share Posted November 19, 2009 That looks better, though I'd drop the lv from 11 down to 10, and then everything should be fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 "Ancient Gear Degrade Beta" or "Jet Black Metallic Gear".I love Jet Black Metallic Gear. That's an epic name! :DThat looks better' date=' though I'd drop the lv from 11 down to 10, and then everything should be fine[/quote'] Hm... only problem is I can't drop the level to 10 because of the contest I'm using it in... :/ Do you have any other suggestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 well then 3300 atk for lv11 is still a little low for it In that case, give it a base atk of 400 or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Kay, I'll do that. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 changes made. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Delinquent Girl NiAtSoFi Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 If this is an Ancient Gear-related card, then why did you pick the Black Devil from Megaman X5? Also, monster's level cannot go below 1. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Hm. Didn't realize that that was from a show. :?Do you have ideas for corrections, or a better pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 OCG fix: When this card's Level is 1, destroy it. That's probably how I would word it. I like the idea and picture, and so I'll give 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 changes made. :D much better, I'll now raise my rate to 9.1/10 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted November 20, 2009 Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Ahhh, works when you wanna Synchro Summon... Well, the pic reminds me of Upgrade. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Thanks for the critiques. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 20, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2009 Still more changes made. Now 3 tributes are required to summon it, and the special summon from the graveyard effect now can only work once per turn. In addition, instead of:If this card's Level is 0, destroy it I put:If this card's Level cannot be reduced during your Standby Phase, destroy it. More critique, anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Wright~ Posted November 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted November 21, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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